Reviews for Unspoken
FearOfDeathIsIllogical chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
A great story. Very well written.
mmmgirl13 chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
that is so *sniffle*Sniffle* sad. good, but sad
Pia193 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Please send me the other ending. They should be together Gosh!
sugary sweet and sour chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
I know this is wayyyy after the fact, but I just read this and I absolutely need to read the alternate ending! This definitely made me cry! Also, on a completely different note... I need help finding a Beta and wondered if you had any advice! P.S. I absolutely LOVE this story.
rose-la cullen chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
so...to lazy to login but wanted the alt ending so here i am. I was very close to crying when they admitted feelings for each other and pretty pissed at bella for taking the selfless route. (how very bella of her. grrr.) at any rate, excellent non-lemony story (which seems to be a rarity in jasper/bella fics) with a realistic and not-so-perfect ending.

pssst,...btw,can you e-mail me the altermate ending? my e-mail is
KristinHazzard chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Heart wrenching! Plz send the alternate ending :)
xXxJessikaxXx chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
This is so good! But it made me so sad. I wanna cry now...
GlamorousIndieRockAndRoll chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
omg that is so sad! poor bella, poor jasper please send me the other ending, i hope it's happy they deserve it! x
Autumnltd chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Crying, indeed! I now need vodka and pie... This was heartbreaking and brilliant!
abaker9 chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
This was horrible! Not in the badly written sense-that was great-but in the "I'm crying and my heart is breaking sense". Oh god. Please send me the alternate ending .I pray it's the happy ending so I can wipe this heartbreak from my mind.
missalexwhitlock123 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
sweet! i love it !
CullenHaleMcCarty chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
A tissue warning would have been nice... loved it anyway.

thank yoy
HateDecidingUsernames chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
It was a really beautiful story... I loved it! Although, please don't send me the alternate ending not because I dislike bella and jasper or even your writing; just because a cheating jasper and bella is not something I would like to read... :)
Kudos to you!
bringified chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
my gosh, that made me sad. i'm a sucker for this kind of story and i felt really bad when they didn't end up together. damn. you write very well, dear. )
anagharoxox chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
That was so sweet and sad! I'm so close to crying. I usually don't like Jasper/Bella, but this one was amazing. Great job!

Anagha
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