Reviews for The Second Time
Karolsp chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
The EPOV was very very good! His tortured mind was sooo on point! Very sexy too... Loved it!
JulesColes3 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Great story love both point of views
itscait chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
LOVE this one too!

I like how they didn't move to the other room!
KissaSwan chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
This is great! Oh this so fills in the gaps that SM left to the imagination for us "Mature Females". All the young adults stuff defiantly left us wanting... till yours!
baynewen chapter 1 . 12/22/2009

That was explosive,...and wow! I really don't know what else to say!
Wanda1988 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
I like how you write from both perspectives. It's great. These one-shots are very hot! )
twilightmecrazii chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
i loved it it was so cute
madian chapter 1 . 9/15/2009

great job and well done!

You've got a knack for this!


Sunray16 chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
HOT! WOW...pardon me while I catch my breath. Love it!
freak-joy-spastic chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Another smashing sucess! I applaud you. I got to say though, I really love it told from Edwards POV. Much anime love ~bye bye~
Hono no tenshi chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Hi, I really enjoyed your fanfic, you write those especial moments so well, thanks for sharing this story with us!