|Reviews for Near|
| Pink Star Art chapter 5 . 1/12/2012
This was a pretty cool story, it was very interesting, although very dark. I really like how you tie it to the real DN story. I wonder what would happen if Near meets his sister after defeating Kira and everything? Anyways, you were really good at showing the emotions and bringing the reader into the story.
| SkywardShadow chapter 4 . 10/23/2009
Yeesh..freaky stuff. This 'warden' guy creeps me out. -.-
The last paragraph was eerie and also kind of sad. It almost makes you sympathize with the guy. Almost.
Ooh, a CG/DN crossover? I LOVE Code Geass, so I look forward to that!
| SkywardShadow chapter 3 . 9/28/2009
Yikes..dunno who to feel worse for; Natalya or Near..
I find the whole family interesting in a morbid sort of way-you've got Near, the obviously scared prodigy; Natalya, the jaded older sister who appears to be more normal than any of them; the psychotic father and miserable, suicidal mother. Lotsa trauma in there that might account for some of Near's quirks later in life.
Great chap; I like reading about your OC as well.
| Ryuks-Poizun-Apples chapter 3 . 9/22/2009
Sorry, I read the first chapter but didn't have time to review so I'm reviewing now! 8) Wonderful story! Can't wait for the next chapter(s)! Keep up the good work!
| SkywardShadow chapter 2 . 9/12/2009
Hallelujah! I've been trying to get at this chapter all day and ffnet was glitching or something..
Anyway. You executed the 'sickness' idea very well; I like that it was divided by the quarantine days. I also liked Near's mother; she seemed IC..which is strange to say, since we never saw her, but something about her here felt right.
And little Near..picking things up even at such a young age.
Rester at the end was a nice touch. x)
| SkywardShadow chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Yikes. That was shiver-worthy.
I think alternating between flashbacks and Near's current, disjointed thoughts was definitely the way to go; so kudos for that!
Gotta say this..I think you have an evil mind. XD That was flippin' creepy, and I could tell you really thought it out.
I really liked the last line. It's like, 'aha, so that's where he gets his complex'.
Great work..it was psychological, original, and..well, creepy! Nicely done! xD