Reviews for Demonstration
Chocolate Sebastian chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
mckennamarieh chapter 1 . 6/22/2015
Lavonya chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
MirandaPrime chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
I rather enjoyed that.
Only problen is that i now have a new Rachet Ironhide fettish.
ILOVEMARKAXEL chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
i love this story
Lyra Harp chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Okay, a broom or a bat I get...But a POLE? Where'd she get a pole in a military base? o.0 Besides that, I don't think Ironhide did a good job of knocking some shame into Ratchet. It didn't take him long to lose the medic, either. He's worse than Red Alert! At least Red has a valid excuse! Ratchet needs to learn more about humans...
Ahem. A humorous, if ooc, piece. Would it be possible to give an extra chapter or add the lecture that Ironhide gave Optimus as bonus material?
technoWriter15 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
SerialAuthor chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
This was pure love, and funny.
TransformersAreMyLife chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
This is funny. Ratchet's voyeuristic sense, Ironhide dragging him away, Will get caught in the middle (loved his reponse to finding out he'd been 'let off'), Hide's brief jealousy and reluctance, Optimus and Sam (of course, they're arent enough of these two lol!) and oh yeah...I dont think even Ratchet really knows how it will work if that manual is anything to go by...just seemed like a mix of 'possibles' to me. Very good XD
AkiraNatsume chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Is there going to be another sequel or chapters/stories?
xStarSaber chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Poor Will! XD. Loved the Hide/Ratchet scene too.
Peya Luna chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
ROFL! somehow i cant get the picture of ratchet directing a porn movie out of my mind - and i wonder if will can ever ride in ironhide again without blushing...or staring at the gearshift XD
smounged1989 chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
This is just as great as the first will there be another one?
scaryprincess chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
that was very funny! I loved it and I loved the other one too it made me happy on the inside cause thats where it counts. Continue writing your pretty good _

many red panda hugs,

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