Reviews for Portal of Time
Guest chapter 2 . 8/7/2011
Their last name is Kairos. *CHRONOS* is the name of the coffee shop.
741AuthorNCS chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
Keep at it!
iLoVeCaRDcApToRsAkuRa chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Thiis is an amazing version of the original game!

BTW, is the pen purple because in the game, Ivring has a purpke pen and so because this is like an opposite version of the game, Lea has a purple pen and Iviring will have a green one?


Smart Aleckette chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
How interesting. :)

I have to wonder how Ethan will figure into this story. Why does Timothy call his name instead of Lea's during the dream?

Also, I'm going to go for the chocolate cookies and say that the substitution of Lea for Ethan caused some kind of time rip. Either that or it's some alternate world where the Kairos pen is purple and not green.

The only thing I don't like is how closely it follows the game, using the same dialogue and everything. It would be better if it followed the basic plot but the dialogue was different. Just a suggestion.
741AuthorNCS chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
God... we need more Time Hollow fic... but a good story!