Reviews for Not As It Seems
Guest chapter 26 . 4/1
oh my god she must be pretty bad at hunting if it took her 26 chapters to find him out AND faint jfc WHAT THE HECK.
Guest chapter 26 . 3/15
This is the best fanfiction I've ever read! Please carry on x I want to know what happens *cries*
Guess chapter 1 . 3/9
Please updat! It's been forever!
Guest chapter 21 . 1/1
I know this is edward/bella but I can't help but not want them to be together I am team edward but I don't thing they should end up together
AnnabethCullen349 chapter 26 . 11/14/2013
Hi this is an amazing story! And I know it's been over a year but can u please continue with the story! It's too good to stop! Thank u!
Vicki219 chapter 26 . 11/8/2013
Wicked story. Hope you update more soon.
Guest chapter 26 . 10/1/2013
Please write more, I love this story and I really want to know what happens next
MangaMagic chapter 26 . 8/28/2013
I feel like I should laugh because it says you were going to update within two weeks, but I guess you went back on that. I understand it though, and I have to say this was a very good fanfiction while it lasted. I saw that your father had a heart attack, I give you my condolences and hope he got well. Those flame messagers are beoches and deserves to be hung from the platform of fanfiction justice! I hope to read more about this, maybe if you don't have any inspiration for the scene after the last, you could have a flashback to Bobby and Bella's conversation about vampires, and maybe a scene from her father's point of view ;) Haven't heard from him yet, and he's going to throw a right hissyfit when he finds Bella has been swooning over a vampire (vegetarian or no).
MangaMagic chapter 9 . 8/26/2013
I always hated that episode, this chapter was so painful to read through! But I persisted and now I'm ready for more 3
Rarity4Evr chapter 11 . 8/9/2013
Gah! I just love how you've made everyone! If the characters in twilight were like they r here, I would enjoy reading it a lot more than I do. Lol. Awesome job so far!:D
blueyedfreak chapter 26 . 7/29/2013
Update like right now!
maryclairewarren chapter 26 . 7/26/2013
so im guessing you gave up on the story?
Guest chapter 26 . 7/26/2013
This was exactly the type of story I was looking for! Finally, an xover with good grammar and keeping everyone in character! I would normally go into farther detail, but I'm feeling sooooo lazy today...I didn't even sign in :P Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Keep writing,
MinnieMatthews chapter 3 . 6/24/2013
I think that name is so good. Bella Winchester
Guest chapter 26 . 6/21/2013
Hey i really love your story it's actually one of the best i have read and i was kind of sad when i saw that you never finished it specially when you have so many people reading it i think it would be awesome if kept writing it even after so long because there are still a lot of things left to happen anyways i know that you cant update every week but i would really love to be able to keep reading your story .. I guess that's it thanks for reading the review
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