I love a strong Bella character, so I was real excited about this story. I powered through, but unfortunately I felt there was a lot missing in the story. There was very little character development and their relationship seemed to be built on only sex and telling each other how amazing they are and how much they love each other. They don’t seem to really talk about anything, or go anywhere together... you’re a great writer, I just felt your portrayal of a relationship wasn’t realistic and sounded more like infatuation than anything genuine

Are you going to post the honeymoon outtake like you said? I would really love a future outtake or something so we know if they will have kids and that kind of stuff. This is the best story I have every read and thank you so much for sharing it with us

Loved every second of it. I'm glad Bella and Edward are still strong after what they've been through and I feel as if it were even stronger than before. Thank you for am amazing story. I also read the outtakes you posted. I think you should do retail therapy in Edwards point of view. I absolutely loved it.

I love the independent Bella.

I love it so far. Edward seems like a perfect gentlemen and is hard not to love.

This is a beautifully written story. I have loved every second of it and am glad they worked out the whole stock thing. I don't blame Bella for giving them a break, though. That's a big thing to keep from somebody you love. This is by far the most beautiful, sensitive Edward I've ever read and you are the only person I have read to get that love they have for each other written down in a way that makes sense. I love it and keep up with you're writing.

Why does almost everybody remove their fics from here?I went to Nerac and she only has one Fic left and it’s not “Picture Windows”. Even if they publish a story, why not leave the original on fanfic. I don’t get it, is it about the money? Oh well, back to this story...

God, here I was thinking he and the whole family were in the Mafia or something! Damn I guess Edward new all along about Bella!

I have a bad feeling about what Edward is up too something, Of course you want us to think that ;) He’s very secretive about his job! Are they all in the Mafia or something Lol! I don’t know what is going on with Edward but I hope I find out soon!

Oh nooo! I figured that was going to happen!

Edward will always be hotter than Jacob. But Taylor is sweet! I didn’t find out about Twilight until 2011 and I wish I was there at the beginning! Oh well its all over now but we have our dvd’s! We also have Jamie Dornan, Yum! But Edward will always be my favorite! I’m too old for this but I’m very young at heart!

I don’t understand how some ladies lov

This is definitely one of the most beautiful and amazing stories I have ever read. Very well written and believable. Thank you for writing this.

This has to be the most annoying Bella I've ever read in fan fiction. I understand you need drama for a story, but I couldn't get over this Bella. Edward should have left after her third (and not last) misunderstanding, "magnetic pull" be damned.

i’ve tried a few times now to read this, but i just can’t get past this Bella. she’s just... an idiot for lack of a better word. sorry.