Guest chapter 16 . 5/31
I don't get it. didn't Marias father attack forks with eliazar? if so, should he not be beheaded for treason? but instead Carlisle makes a deal with him regarding Maria betrothal. that is goofy...
Guest chapter 15 . 5/31
"tanya is not bad," ? really? with her high almighty attitude with the king and queen? with the blackmail to get what she wants? lying and claiming edward as the father? "cheating" on edward with other men? scheming with her sister, irena to cause these problems, laying with a married man, wanting to rid of bella to become the queen...I'm sure there's more... this story is really quite laughable, asinine...should have done a better research on history if you wanted to write a piece with historical background...
Guest chapter 6 . 5/31
it's amazing how bella as the queen would allow anyone let alone her husbands lover to be so disrespectful to her. royalties have had bastards in the history of royalties and it's quite ridiculous that bella would cower and give into any demands of tanya...just should have behead her for treason and be done with. royalties back those days had all the powers and connections. your story though entertaining is unbelievably absurd that this nobody had any chance against the king and queen is just foolish. yes, tanya is a "lady" but she would be ostracized, shunned for being pregnant out of wedlock with the kings baby no less...that part of the story is completely moronic.
Guest chapter 10 . 5/31
idk if you're in agreement with everything bella is doing but I think she's a fool. yes, she's a queen and allowed to have her opinions but she is very naive. her compassion for tanya is so idiotic and misplaced. you will prob make tanya so thankful to her in the end but bella has shown how weak she is instead of being a strong queen, she is a quivering litthe girl who doesn't want to face reality. just that she's the queen prob will save her in the end.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/3/2017
though i enjoy fics such as these period pieces, i am having a difficult time
liking this story...i am quite frustrated by bella's behavior, her so called solution
to tanya situation while allowing her to continue disrespecting her, king and queen
of the anyone can be allowed to do so esp someone who was a whore...
most of the good period pieces in fanfictions are well studied from its period with
behavior by the class system well documented throughout history...certainly these
are fics, however i would think kings and queens would have some power over
any well as nobles..i am having difficulties in continuing this story...
just seems so idiotic, illogical, irrational...plain nonsensical...
Guest chapter 9 . 7/3/2017
i am not sure it's due to the translation but the large paragraphs
in this story are all one long's rather incredible how
the whole damn thing is one long run-on sentence...
it's so very difficult to read and understand it (the paragraphone long sentence)
Guest chapter 7 . 7/3/2017
as king and queen, you have given edward and bella very little power...
surprisingly...their word should be law as the monarch and they can
say and do just about anything when it comes to tanya's claims...
i realize you are trying to make this story exciting with tanya's scheme,
but you are doing so by making the king and queen live by a commoner's
code which is rather silly..imo...
Lupita Pattinson Cullen chapter 16 . 7/17/2015
Buena historia, solo un par de consejos, revisa la ortografía y deberías usar mas signos de puntuación.
Tecupi chapter 16 . 4/8/2015
Me ha gustado la historia, pero he decir que tiene muchas faltas de ortografía, no quiero que os siente mal lo que estoy diciendo, pero faltan muchos acentos, a veces no sé si estoy leyendo en pasado o en presente, los nombres propios siempre van en mayúsculas y pondría guiones antes de empezar los diálogos. Quitando eso como ya he dicho me ha gustado la historia.
rockergirl661 chapter 16 . 12/30/2014
Hermosa historia!
rockergirl661 chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
Una historia hermosa!
patricia1204 chapter 5 . 3/28/2013
Cielos popbre edward deberia haberle contado a Bella lo que pasa un abrazo patricia1204
patricia1204 chapter 3 . 3/28/2013
vaya creo que fue donde Tania yes afue la gata que lo raguño un abrazo patricia12014
patricia1204 chapter 2 . 3/28/2013
vaya Edward la quiere pero por rencor con sus padres quiere alejar a Bella pero en fin el deso fue mayor un abrazo patricia1204
patricia1204 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Hola anna pinta interesante esta historia un abrazo patricia1204
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