Reviews for Shizune's Special Day
Lenny mosca chapter 1 . 2/24
can you a a sequel story would much appreciate it thank you and make it long this time
cold zone chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
This story is highly humorous , i really enjoyed it.
sonicthehedgehog240 chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
Boy shizune dodge that bullet lol
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
This wasn't bad, I thought it was really funny. "Job app, marriage proposal, death threat."
"Pocky, tomato, sake" "youthful speed" all made me laugh
Shinobu213 chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Bad fan fiction? No, the Sasuke tomato affinity was hilarious. Was that in the manga that?

but a short story on the pairing is not bad especially with humor.
Captain Omnitron chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
That was awesomely funny! I freaking love this pairing too! Just wish it got more attention. I guess some might have problems with the age difference, but then again my mom is 10 years older than my dad so as long as Naruto's 18 by the time they got married I don't see the big deal myself. After all, 10 years isn't that much of an age difference when you think about it. Provided one of them is legal age of course.
VioletSaber chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Wow that was a fantastic read! I'm not even exaggerating when I say this, but this is up there for one of the best NaruShiz fanfics and easily the best NaruShiz oneshot I have read so far. Loved how you told the story from Shizune's POV, the humor was fantastic, and I really liked how the ending gives readers alot of closure!
n-fan chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
I'll start off by saying that you should check for spelling errors and (,) errors before posting. Naruto and Shizune is a bit unrealistic, but i couldn't care less about that, because the story was really good and exciting. Even a friend of mine who hates unrealistic fanfictions loved it. I give it 5/6
onlytoask chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
The only thing I didn't absolutely love about this was the actual confession scene. Everything else was perfect.
Hakkyou30 chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
i absolutley loooved it . i reckon there should be more naru/shzu pairing fanfics.
002219 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Bad fan-fiction?

NONSENSE.

This is one of the funniest fanfics I have ever read. The jokes are well-thought of and executed almost perfectly. Grammar can be bad at some points, but completely forgivable!

This is a masterpiece.

And now I know the true story of how Sasuke Uchiha attained the Mangekyo Sharingan... along with what Akatsuki does in their spare time.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
I would recommend practicing your math skills as well, on October 8th you wrote that Shizune had 6 more days until Naruto's birthday on October 10th. First you wrote that his next birthday was his 16th, when Hinata is lurking she muses to herself that it's his 18th birthday.
This was a little rough, but it shows you were coming up with material and getting some practice writing.
I wouldn't mind reading a more polished story in the future.

Cheers!
Bob Bandicoot chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Nice story! Although I am not much of a fan of this pairing, except for the fact that they see each other as brother and sister they do have like ten years difference in age, this was very well writen and incredibly funny. The parts with Kakashi, Jiraia, Sasuke and his crew and the Akatsuki were the best! Not to mention the face off with the Uchiha brothers! I don't know why you said this but, this is a very good story.
Justagoodguy chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
*Inhales deeply* You smell that? You know what that is? That's some good crack, that's what it is.
KuroiHanabixShenny chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
The grass was glistening with dew; the birds were singing their morning songs in the trees and the distant cries of 'flames of youth' could be heard across the village.

Another beautiful day in Konoha and Shizune was up with the earliest calls of 'power of youth'.

'Another day to spend plotting…ahem…planning Naru-kun's birthday.'

"Why Kami? WHY MEEEEEEEEEEEEEE?" Kakashi called to the heavens.

"Bill, bill, job application, bill, marriage proposal to Zetsu, bill, bill, death threat, bill, fan mail, bill." He reeled off looking at each envelope briefly.

"So, a Mexican standoff." Sasuke said as he surveyed the situation."Apparently so." Itachi replied, though neither one of them knowing where in the hell Mexico was.

Seeing him she did the first thing that came naturally to her...blushing, swooning and hiding behind a tree, viewing from afar.

ROTFLMAO d(*-*)
Crack, Horrible, Cheesy and Freaking Awesome d(*-*)
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