Reviews for The Return
Nipples chapter 26 . 7/6/2013
Is that all your writing on this one?
Guest chapter 10 . 7/5/2013
When is she going to properly tell anyone about her baby?
Guest chapter 26 . 10/4/2012
Please please continue I live this story and want to see how it ends xxxx
layali86 chapter 26 . 12/15/2011
i love it more soon
Beautiful Nightmare chapter 26 . 11/18/2011

2) I just blushed like mad. My belly is still red. I'm not good at reading smut, I giggle like a school girl caught with her mommy's dirty romance novels.

3) Did I mention Hector? Cause I love me so Hector!

Finally caught up! I'll be checking back for more, Ma.
Beautiful Nightmare chapter 25 . 11/18/2011
"seeing this soft side of Vince was a treat"

I'd like to see the soft side of Vince... that didn't come out right. You know what I meant. Haha.
Beautiful Nightmare chapter 23 . 11/18/2011
Nicole Ew.
Beautiful Nightmare chapter 17 . 11/18/2011
"Come out, Come out wherever you are."

Ha! That made me giggle. It was so creepy. I pictured Jack Nicholson with his face pushed through a broken door. I don't know what movie that is or what he actually says but I can picture that line coming out.
Princess of Darkness17 chapter 26 . 11/12/2011
awesome update soon pls
KingVictoria chapter 26 . 11/7/2011
this was yet again another great chapter! i'm glad they made can we get Nicole?
Beautiful Nightmare chapter 16 . 11/5/2011
Eeeep! Keith is a slimy rat. Dom's gonna mess up his pretty face!
Shawnied777 chapter 26 . 11/4/2011
Yayyy! Chapter 26! I had been eagerly awaiting the moment when Letty FINALLY told Dom about Nicole's murdering a** lol! BUT, I'll settle for some smut instead ; ) There's ALWAYS next chapter haha!

Haha, Letty should know by now that she can't escape Dom when he wants to talk. Plus, this is a super important conversation they need to have so she really needs to stop running from it. Daaaaaang, in A MONTH? Not gonna lie, that must have been really difficult for him. But, I do really like that he didn't press her about it and he had done some research to try and figure out what could be wrong with her. Absolutely loved this line, "Getting down to brass tax, I was horny and I wanted her NOW. I felt like I've been fair in giving her, her space and not crowding her with my needs, but damn, I missed my wife." I thought Dom's little moment of thinking about their daughter was super cute, and I'm happy that he's holding out hope they'll have more children one day. WOW, with everything Dom said to her in the bedroom he pretty much became the best husband ever lol. Strong, honest, compassionate, patient and loving : ) The "cookie monster" sounds so flippin adorable! But what can you expect from two super hot parents lol.

Yay Letty's bday party! So so cute that Mia is preggo! A house full of babies : ) WOW, Letty in a dress? All on her own? And she was blushing during the bday song? She's gettin soft lol. But oh wait, there she goes playin street ball with the her dress...I retract my previous statement lol. Uh oh, drunk Dom random Jamal dude flirting with Letty TROUBLE. HAHAHAHAHA, I loooooved this, especially coming out of drunk Dom's thoughts, "I raised my eyebrows in disbelief. Did this muthafucker just say that to me? Does he not know who I am? Not only was I Mr. Badass Dominic Toretto but I was Letty's husband. And I wasn't having that shit."

Smut was HOTT lol, can't deny that! I mean damn, there are no words lol. I loved how he was thinking that she was "hotter than ever" and that she "simply intoxicated" him. Yeah he was turned WAY on and wanted some, but he just loves her so darn much too. "I never loved anything like I loved Letty. She was my air." Perfect : ) But Letty girl, you BETTER tell him in the morning! Even though we all know he's gonna be super pissed you kept this from him for so long...GREAT chapter!
Mrz Letty Ortiz-Toretto chapter 26 . 11/4/2011
Beautiful Nightmare chapter 2 . 10/25/2011
I feel as though I recognized your name from the UVDFC boards but I'm not sure. Anyways, so far it's pretty good. Too bad Letty lost the baby.

(Welsh's name I 100% recognize!) I will continue to read when I can spare a little more time! Maybe later.

Lynds (a.k.a Moon)
KingVictoria chapter 25 . 10/24/2011
awww great chapter! its great theyre friends please update this so we can find Nicole and get her!
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