|Reviews for Fox in the Garden|
| bbb136 chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
i want more :D
its a shame you haven't continued this- its got real potential!
| uchihacutie chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
thiis was so hiilariious...U git Axel's personaliity down perfectly...ii mean damn...and that boner was too much...have mercy...
Maybe if he weren't so sexy ii could stiill thiink straiight, but untiil then...ii'll just keep foamiing at the mouth...
| Compelled chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Ooh, I love it.
The way you write Axel is hilarious, and I can't wait to see the next part.
| Agatsuma Ritsuka chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Axel's on FIRE!
Yeah I know that was lame, anyways the sad thing is that I can imagine Demyx getting off on Beatles music. Thankyouverymuch, I'll never be able to listen to them with a straight face again.
| Dance.Grimmjow.Dance chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
Aha, great story.
I actually think this may be my favorite Axel pov.
Evryone else makes him seem so...innocent XD
When he's clearly not.
| XIII Riku chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
XD Okay... Axel's a pussy. But I still want to read more! ... Okay, so I love it. Update soon!