Reviews for 9 Settembre, Ti Voglio Bene
MayIGoOutSensei chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
OMG! I wanna cry ToT I LOVE IT SO MUCH! thank yo so much for this!
Disasterbate chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Ermergerd this is so sweet and sexy! I love it!
Ardespuffy chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Since you wanted to improve: "I like you" actually translates as "Mi piaci", in Italian. "Ti Voglio Bene" is what we use when we mean "I love you" in a friend/family sort of relationship. I should know, that's my mother language. :p

Idiom notes aside, good job, although the lemon is pretty far-fetched. A first time with no lube at all? I should think it's damn near excruciating, if not altogether impossible. O_O

Points for trying, though! Your Yamamoto is adorable.
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
Oh God.. I can't find any words to express my feelings now.. I just love this story.. It's so cute yet horny... /
Lumoa chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
That was really really good lemon. I have read many a lemon and I know brilliant ones when I seem them. It wasn't rushed, and you even gave us some character in there. I liked how more realistic it was (no magical appearing lube!) and also how we could feel the love the characters ha for each other.

Plus it was just really good smut 8D
FlowerAntlers chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Awesome :D

For your first lemon it

really came out great!

They are so cute together

and I like the beast

inside Yamamoto a lot ;)

My nose is bleeding...
Paradoxismminant chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Sooo fluffy XD. I love how you made their first time all clumsy and such :D You're off to a great start!
counter-intuitive chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
That last bit was so cute haha xD
AlarmedMouse chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
TheRealMapleSyrup chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
this was a cute cute, a little sappy, but I liked it. Especially the end, those two are simply adorable
dragonphoenixdemon chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
ending was so cute *o*

very sweet and enjoyable~ keep it up!
M is for Mango chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
perfect :)

loved this fic 33 fav'd
Sinful Princess chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
Aw! That was so sweet! Amazing lemon fyi. :P Keep writing! _
Yuki Tamashi-Uchiha chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
It was great..

it is one of my favorit paarings..

the story was awsome..

(sorry for that many mistakes...but i'm german xDD)
ILovePineapples69 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
I really like how you portrayed them as complete virgins.

That's it ought to be; Yama has the biggest crush on the deluded Italian... saving his virginity for someone special.

Cute story. I faved it. :D

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