|Reviews for -old-Son Of A Gun|
| jh831 chapter 2 . 7/2
well...a good way is probably to oh, I don't know...CONTINUE THE STORY?
its good, if it will get updated, pm me and i'll take another look at the story
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2014
Good could be a little better but this is your first fanfic hope you get better
| guardsman101 chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
AWESOME TOTLY KICK ASS
| otherrealmwriter chapter 2 . 1/8/2010
Okay, I will give you a few tips here.:
1. Don't Itacacise and underline makes things harder to read.
On chapter 2 I noticed:
-at edge of camp-
Annie galloped up to Colton, Colton coughed in all of the dust and said “took Yah long enough” Annie replied “so what?”…
Should be more like:
-At edge of camp-
Annie galloped up to Colton. Colton coughed in all of the dust and said, “Took Yah long enough”
Annie replied “So what?”
I hope this helps you. I got a GTA/Gun crossover you may like.
| Q's Little Nerd chapter 2 . 1/3/2010
GUYS NO UPDATES FOR AWHILE, I HAVE WRITERS BLOCK!
| Lunar the dragon chapter 2 . 12/29/2009
Are you ever going to update?
| AnarchyGunRage chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
You're doing really well on this. Keep going.