Reviews for -old-Son Of A Gun
guardsman101 chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
AWESOME TOTLY KICK ASS
otherrealmwriter chapter 2 . 1/8/2010
Okay, I will give you a few tips here.:

1. Don't Itacacise and underline makes things harder to read.

On chapter 2 I noticed:

-at edge of camp-

Annie galloped up to Colton, Colton coughed in all of the dust and said “took Yah long enough” Annie replied “so what?”…

Should be more like:

-At edge of camp-

Annie galloped up to Colton. Colton coughed in all of the dust and said, “Took Yah long enough”

Annie replied “So what?”

I hope this helps you. I got a GTA/Gun crossover you may like.
Ca C'est L'Amour chapter 2 . 1/3/2010
GUYS NO UPDATES FOR AWHILE, I HAVE WRITERS BLOCK!
Lunar the dragon chapter 2 . 12/29/2009
Are you ever going to update?
AnarchyGunRage chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
You're doing really well on this. Keep going.