|Reviews for Tangled Web|
| bluemaybits chapter 10 . 10/23/2009
I quite liked this chapter, but its surprising that Bella's taking Edward's eating habits lightly.
| radioactive77 chapter 9 . 10/23/2009
This is great!
| twi fever chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
FINALLY! Love, love, love this chapter. Can't wait to read the next one. BRAVO, amazing job as always:)
| Bennyjo4 chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
Wow! Your right didn't see that coming, but I liked it. Look forward to your next update.
| HeathersTwilight chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
dying for more
| favludo chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
so exciting! cant wait to read more
| wantmoretwilightnow chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
OMG - HOW CAN YOU END HERE? ?
I saw the update email at work, FINALLY got home, ignored the dogs to read the chapter (how pathetic am I?) and then you end with this cliffhanger?
You evil genius!
| jackiehydelover chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG...UGH! I hate cliff hangers! Bella was really great at hiding from Edward that she knew what Phil was. Can't wait to see what Edward does in the chapter :D
| u2shay chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
Please, Please, Please update soon!
Loved it! I want to know what our dear conflicted Edward is going to do!
| francophile1 chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
Unexpected! No joke. This is my first time reviwing, but after that little surprise, I could not help myself. I loved the chapter.
I really liked how he could not help himself and went looking for her. It was great to read how comfortable they are with each other.
I am so afraid of what the Volturie will try to do to them. I just hope you like happy endings.
| ash0507 chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
Oh no...I personally think he should get her to the cullens asap.
| hotmama4jd chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
OK, completely didn't see that one happening like that. Talk about a bombshell. I think Bella knocked ME over with that one. Gulp. What the hell is Edward going to do? Argh.
Thanks for the quick updates. You rock.
| MoniMD chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
Here I was so certain that Bella did not know Phil was a vampire. My reasoning was that if she knew, she would have known Edward was a vampire too... HAhahahahahaha Wasn't I right?
She reallY fooled us all. Well, at least Edward and I. She is truly difficult to read. I share Edward's pain. :)
The chapter was short but for some reason it seemed just right. It was like a band-aid and how else can you ask if your boyfriend is a vampire?
Anyway, I did my part so you go now and post next chapter... :D but hey, no pressure! Mwah!
| cindysark chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
I kind of saw that coming but I can't wait to see what Edward does about it!
| PLEASE DELETE1 chapter 9 . 10/22/2009
Well, THAT cutoff was just unfair... and can I say "whoops!" for Bella? I really like where you're going with this, but I need more! (And I was secretly hoping that "coffee" was a fun euphemism for other fun rainy day activities...) I've never seen this kind of story set up like this, and it's finally getting exciting! And I also really like your writing style. The last sentence of this was really good, by the way.
Cheers! (That review really jumped around a lot, didn't it?)