Reviews for She's Come Undone
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Willow and Faith? Woo-hoo. Again, though, poor Spike. I like how even though the past seems to be repeating itself (in an odd sort of way), people are finally getting it right. Probably helps that there isn't any romantic competition now...

And poor Fred! Her boys really let her down, didn't they? Hopefully, the scoobies will be able to fix it.
snowflakes849 chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Oh god. Fred makes me want to cry.

It's so heartbreaking.

"I got so lost."

I love how Spike is standing by her, just like Willow did when Tara was out of it. It must be so hard for him, but he stays with her. Oh, how love effects and changes us.

You have captured my interest and I hope you keep writing these stories!
Saggit chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
Powerful, and grim, with excellent characterization. I especially liked:

"And finally, finally, Willow understands.

And remembers a bouquet of flowers with an unsigned card.

And is a little ashamed."

Nice to see a piece that kicks in the Scoobies' teeth by the process of drawing upon their natural faults, in surroundings where they would arise, rather than forcing these to the fore to push the plot.

And who needs a plot?

Great stuff. Please, keep them (and your main story arc!) coming.
SoUtHeRnBeLLe706 chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
love this series. is there going to be another one following this one?
The Defender chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
I'm beginning to really engjoy these Spike/Fred stories I particularly like the use of the "I got so lost" reference and Willow's reaction to that.
Rosencrantz chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
You're never gonna stop writing these Spike/Fred fics, right?

Cause I love them way too much! :P

So make the next one sooner rather than later.