Didn’t say how much I hate Roger because I do and I feel like that marriage proposal was superficial I don’t even think she loves him like that.

I officially hate roger

Yup Roger is quite the annoying character but still good story apart from Roger :)

It might just be but Roger is just so annoying. But love the story.

The one with a name 'like Sideswipe' would probably be Sideways?

I'm annoyed, this story seems to only be going on because the mc won't shut up, it feels like it's being forced, "say something you shouldn't have, things get awkward and the mc berates herself, she does it again in the next chapter" the clumsy dunce personality isn't funny or cute when it's done this much, it just ruins the story, the only reason this story is popular is because of how long ago it was made and how little transformers stories there are, when surfing through a sea of garbage fanfics people aren't normally able to distinguish between a dumpster-fire and an above average dumpster-fire fanfic, this one just happens to be one of those that got lucky.

I don’t think I’ve ever read a fan fiction this long before, but I’m intrigued and somehow you keep putting things in here that keep intriguing me further. I love the sibling bonds and the protectiveness of the autobots.

Not so much because it’s just there (that’s a part of it), but because it feels earned. I love it when it gets to that point.

Good story

yYOU WROTE THAT SHE WAS SUPPOSED TO BE SMART! SHE CAN EVEN REVERSED ENGINEER SOMETHING AND THEN SHE KEEP MENTIONING AUTOBOTS HERE AND THERE AS IF THE SITUATION IS AT ALL TOO NORMAL! HOW CAN SHE FUCKING NOT REALIZE HER SITUATION WHEN ALL THE CLUES AND EVERYTHING IS PINTING AT HER ALREADYYYYYYYYY!~! THIS IS SO FUCKING RIDICULOUS AND STUPID

first of all the journal is lame, and second of all the way th MC is acting so stupid, despite being said that she was smart is IRONIC and so ugly written. made up your mind, make her stupid or make her smart!

This was good. I wasn't so sure how I liked the proxy thing but it kinda grew on me. Well done

“I just hope I didn’t launch the proverbial atom bomb” she says when in relation to sideswipe, a mech notorious for his vengeful ways

Hi Faecat, I read this story many many years ago when I was still new to the exciting world of both Transformers and Fanfiction, and I remember that I really enjoyed reading it back then. You were one of the first authors I ever read, and your wonderful introduction to the fascinating world of fanfics triggered a years-long source of enjoyment (and mild obsession, admittedly) for me.

I've since read many fanfics and joined many fandoms, but I've recently gotten into Transformers again, so I decided to revisit this story. And I've gotta say, I'm enjoying it as much as I did the first time around! I recognize now that this story does have its flaws, but I still think it's a great work. I love Aurian's story, her interactions with the bots (and especially her bots), and I really just want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for ever having thought to create and publicly post this story.

I don't know where you are in life now, but I sincerely hope it is going well for you. I see that you haven't added more to your profile in the last couple of years, so I really hope your love for writing, whether fanfic or original content or anything else really, hasn't faded away. And if it has, I hope one day you find the inspiration and joy to return to it, or perhaps that you find other things in life that give you as much happiness or more as reading your work has given me.

Merry Part, Faecat

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Wait what was he going to say? "Bo