Reviews for Commander
Shananigan chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
holy hell that was hot
SarahShalomDavid chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
woah!
WonderousPlaceForAnEcho chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
I didn't know what to expect from this, considering the title has a certain connotation of 13 being in control but I liked that she was considerate in her own way and it wasn't overly smutty. I thought it was pretty realistic, which is to say I think the events are something 13 would do. Her character seems the type to enjoy control and take pride in basically making Cameron feel good and although Cameron seemed annoyed at one point in your story I think she enjoyed it because I think its in her nature to be the more submissive one in comparison to 13. Overall I thought it flowed well, it wasn't jumpy and I thought it stayed true to the characters.
SoccerLover1 chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Loved it. :)

Thanks
garnet thrill chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Oh holy bananas.

That was GOOD.