Reviews for love and hurt
Siena Katie chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
I loved it! Don't you dare tell me it was crappy Imma hurt you if you say it.:P
shinofangirl chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
I am going to mention that your grammar is terrible but leave it at that. My main concern is that Train is not as violent as you made him seem in this one. He would not have mercilessly crushed a girl's arm without sufficient cause to do so when it had yet to be proven that Eve had been violated. He would have swiftly taken care of those responible after, but not before. I did enjoy the fact that that bastard pig got had junk shot off but that's beside the point. If you work on your grammar and the character's ations (maybe switch povs less often) you may become a writer that is one step up from mediocre. If you continue as you have done this, you will remain substandard.
7MukuroRealm7 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Umm, if this is over, you should put "Complete" or else people will think it's a multi chapter story.