|Reviews for Sin and redemption|
| rejectsuperstar chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Oooh! This is really good. Well written and riveting.
| Desdemona Kakalose chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Soo... I was a teeny bit confused by the ending, but I got the gist of it. It's good to se more Edgar-fics coming out.
Critique point? I think it would be better for the believability if Edgar didn't say "are you saying you love me?"
that kind of comes out of left feild, and typically people don't fall in love that fast. Perhaps something to the point of "are you hitting on me?" would suit the situation better.
Nice twist, by the way.