Reviews for Lament on a Haystack
cockie chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Don't worry, it's good, really good.
Water Lily chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
No offense and all, but you did make her seem kinda bratty.

*cough cough* Really bratty. *cough*
Jabraille chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
That Don Paolo was able to fool Layton & Luke in his Flora disguise is something that has always baffled me. I'm glad I'm not the only one who noticed the problematic discrepancy.

This seems a little more like a rant than a true fanfic, but the subject is certainly worth exploring.
kittyreilly chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
I feel exactly the same! Flora is so not a brat, and how the hell Layton hadn't noticed a middle aged nutcase had taken the place of his adopted daughter, I will never know!

Okay - Now that's out of my system - I really like this... ;)
Evilsingingllama chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Heheh!

I like Flora, though it does confusing me how Don Paolo could do something like that... He IS an evil genius, maybe he has a machine?
cloudmint chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Your story didn't suck at all! There aren't many storys from Flora's perspective that aren't about her and Luke's supposed love. Bravo! 3 (Flora's my favorite character)