|Reviews for Mentor and Student|
| RoxyLuv19 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Aww, I really liked this, zack's nervous energy...I totally get what you mean about his name! Though, Zackary (or Zachary...I prefer the 'CK' to the 'CH') suits him too lol.
I loved the way they met and everything
| Ms. Unlucky chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
I really, really liked this... :D And I can't wait for the next update!
| Irish-Brigid chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Gotta love Zack the Puppy. _
WOO-HOO! Finally! Someone who doesn't give Zack the full name of Zackary!
Anyway, cool first chapter. I know it's been a year since you updated, but I really hope you add more chapters soon.
| FinalFantasyFreak92 chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
this is really very good.
I like your writing style also. XD
| The Freak Fair chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This was great! I love how you wrote Angeal's character very much 8D As well as Zack's for that matter. I'm looking forward to any future updates on this !
| chibipinkbunny chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
I loved this! I love Zack stories that are non-yaoi _ I saw your opinion on that so I'll have to check and see if you have any more Zack stories. Zack is my favorite! You should write a Zack/Cloud one! The Zack/Cloud hetero stories are sorely lacking. The part where Angeal asks what Zack would do if he betrayed Shinra was so sad. I mean in hindsight that's exactly what Zack did too. . . so sad. Actually that's probably the only part of the game I didn't cry on was Angeal's death. Then the part where Seph talks about the glory days of Shinra being over, that was sad too. I guess that's what made the whole Crisis Core game so sad. You knew what was going to happen to all of these people. One thing I did have an issue with is his age at being a 3rd Class. In the game he's 16 and a 2nd Class, and then he's promoted to 1st at either 17 or 18. Thirteen seems a little young to be a 3rd Class, especially because he would probably have been enrolled in the regular army prior to SOLDIER. Anyway, I really liked this! Thanks _
| floutistvivi chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
| Pinecone Luvver chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Wow. Looks like you put alot of thought into writing this. I've played through CrisisCore twice and didnt think about it as deeply as you.
| Little House in the Woods chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
I was very happy to wake up and read this story. *grins*
I loved how you wrote the characters (it was very enjoyable to see how you portrayed Angeal, Genesis and Sephiroth in particular, because I've been itching to see how you'd write the three friends from Crisis Core) and I liked how established the friendship between Zack and Angeal. I thought the way that you built up Angeal's interest in being Zack's mentor was effective and liked how you used the POVs and opinions from other characters to reinforce and also question Angeal's decision to take on a student who he did not really know and did not really trust.
Lastly, your use of dialogue, conversations and the occasional introspections made the story for me. I felt that you really captured the voices (Gen and Zack in particular) and the way you wrote it made me consider new aspects of the characters' personalities.
Nice story, more please?
| Pretty BlueEyed One chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
I liked your portrayal of their relationship. I've never given much thought to the name, but it makes sense, I guess.
| xEpIcxXxfAiLx chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
:3 I like it so far, and it's nice to see someone else noticing the whole thing with Zack's name. I find it kind of irritating when people use other name's like Zackery, I don't know why... But, interesting idea for a story and I'd like to see more soon!