|Reviews for When I Miss Him|
| Wings.of.Velvet chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
D: This was so good... but I'm thoroughly depressed!
This was handled very well & I love the descriptive words you use, such as when you mentioned, 'his thick, coloured laugh'. That just really got me.
- You have talent~! But I think I've told you that before. Meh, another review, another time.
| E. Writes Sometimes chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
I love how you said so much without saying a lot at all.
your writing style really made me feel what Roxas was feeling which is amazing 3
"No one to kiss me when I'm thinking too much and I'm frowning. Especially because my forehead isn't really mine to frown."
that part is definitely my favorite because I could really see Roxas feeling that way.
| Sexy-Tacos-Emo-Waffles chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
This is really sweet and mildly depressing, but I love it!
It is really well written. and I just want to point out it's "memorized" with a z, instead of "memorised". Sorry if I just insulted you, I just thought it would be good to bring it to your attention. It's still great, though!
| NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 9/9/2009