|Reviews for Part One Meeting Chaos|
| humanhazzard chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
that was epic loved it
think ed could have been a bit more like himself by fighting back agenst captain chaous (love the name)
but really loved it
keep writing i wanna know what happens next
| DragonsandInk chapter 2 . 9/6/2010
Okay, it waz totally uncharacteristic of Ed not to fight against the pirate when she was only holding a sword and not fighting when the girl carried him off and even more so when he was thrown into the room and was like "Oh no! I'm dressing like a girl so I'm so girlie on the inside too, someone help me!" He's still got his transmutations right? Then it's kind of stupid that he would act all helpless!
| sandypinkkitty chapter 2 . 2/10/2010
*snorts* "dont touch the hat." i loves you...and red. have i told you this? and i atually designed a sweatshirt...do ya want one?
| Avampiress chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
i really like your story cant wait for the next chapter
| wishfulliving89 chapter 2 . 9/27/2009
can't wait for the next chapter. good so far.
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
How fun for Ed, being in a dress. *snickers*
How come it's 'Captain Chaos' and not Captain Sparrow?
And why the hell did Ed not protest when he was kidnapped?
But I am intrigued to where this story is headed...