Reviews for Part One Meeting Chaos
humanhazzard chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
that was epic loved it
think ed could have been a bit more like himself by fighting back agenst captain chaous (love the name)
but really loved it
keep writing i wanna know what happens next
DragonsandInk chapter 2 . 9/6/2010
Okay, it waz totally uncharacteristic of Ed not to fight against the pirate when she was only holding a sword and not fighting when the girl carried him off and even more so when he was thrown into the room and was like "Oh no! I'm dressing like a girl so I'm so girlie on the inside too, someone help me!" He's still got his transmutations right? Then it's kind of stupid that he would act all helpless!
sandypinkkitty chapter 2 . 2/10/2010
*snorts* "dont touch the hat." i loves you...and red. have i told you this? and i atually designed a sweatshirt...do ya want one?
Avampiress chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
i really like your story cant wait for the next chapter
wishfulliving89 chapter 2 . 9/27/2009
can't wait for the next chapter. good so far.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
How fun for Ed, being in a dress. *snickers*

How come it's 'Captain Chaos' and not Captain Sparrow?

And why the hell did Ed not protest when he was kidnapped?

But I am intrigued to where this story is headed...