|Reviews for Piaculum|
| jj chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
| wittyying chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
Sounds like a great opening. I look forward to learning about how Hinata will eventually bring "the darkest of men down on their knees" while staying as angelic as she is.
| math music reading chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Wow, this is beautiful so far, please update soon!
| iloveme0808 chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
well, I'm curious on how this story would go.
i hope you update soon.
i'm looking forward to it.:)
| chancharan chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
offending.. how you ended it with a note of her decreasing faith.. it is tragic to say so the least and at most unforgivable.. it is like you show people that by letting go of the Lord and getting a better life.. well that is just wrong.. anyway.. nice story line.. the mixing of religion is some what nerve wrecking..
| Sepsis chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Poor little hinata..:/ Believing its her fault that her mother died..:/
But I really liked it.
| juliagulia1017 chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
i love the tome you've set with this fic. hinata's character, especially her purity, is so well-depicted. you have a great sense of detail, particularly in the images you've woven throughout the introductory chapter. i can't wait to read what comes next. i have happy chills (despite the tragic theme- shame on me)~!