Reviews for Where There's Smoke |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Me, I am hoping that it is. But go Bella, ok you are a little fuelled by alcohol, but you go girl. Karma is a bitch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely first date. They are both so broken (in a way). They will have their ups and downs I am sure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have to say I am liking Mike right now. lol. I am sure he will piss me off at some point. He kind of gave Edward the push he needed. So we appear to be getting somewhere. Don't think it will all be plain sailing though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah I am thinking more and more that Tanya maybe died. Just how Edward was over the saving lives and with his thoughts with the little boy. All the boxes containing her stuff, and the emails, all the mention of visiting her when he comes back. He is either very delusional or he was talking about a grave. Looking forward to finding out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well at least they made an amends. So Bella has told Edward her story, wonder when he will tell her his story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yep, they are both fucked. I love and hate Edward in this chapter. Yeah he was a jerk and he knows it, but I can see why. Seems they are going to have a epic night. Wonder if there will be tension and if anyone will pick up on it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am intrigued to find out what happened to Tanya. Time will tell. Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He makes it sound like she died, but I am not so sure from what Alice said before. Time will tell I guess. Oh yes Edward, I think you are right. Although I don't think it will be plain sailing. Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jacob is a jerk and doesn't deserve Bella. Maybe she should introduce Jessica to him. Hahahahahahaha. Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's Jacob, that says it all in my book. Looking forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Someone rec'd this on a FB site - I spent the weekend reading it and I thoroughly enjoyed it. So much story, drama, angst, and HEA! Thanx for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved this story, it was wonderful, I know stories can't go on forever and I am sad this one had to end but what a way to go |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a great story. So glad I get to add two more writers to my favorite list. Can't wait to read some of ur others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Loved the proposal |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. |