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   pixiekat7 chapter 9 . 10/26/2009 *sighs contentedly* Ladies, Ladies, Ladies...what a sweet, lovely tender chapter. Edward & Bella couldn't have had a more perfect first date. Had to giggle at them having their fist kiss spoiled by a police car, but they certainly made up for it later. Smooches my lovelies for a job well done! |
| CJ1325 chapter 9 . 10/26/2009 Hot! I want a first date to go that well. LMOA! great job can't wait for more. |
| SoraChan01 chapter 9 . 10/26/2009 MORE PLZ |
| Spunkie09 chapter 9 . 10/26/2009 Great first date! Great chapter...enjoyed it. |
| edwardandbellabelong2gether chapter 9 . 10/26/2009 LOVED the first date! |
| thinkb4uact chapter 9 . 10/26/2009 That was a great chapter. It was a great frist date and all actives they did where sweet and hot. It was written very well. Love the whole McBuild-An-Edward converstion. It's great how you write the humor to balance the drama of Edward. |
| keepingupwiththekids chapter 9 . 10/25/2009 Loved working with you gals! I am looking forward to keeping up with you on the forums! |
| FuzzyUnrulyJellyfish chapter 9 . 10/25/2009 Great first date! Now I will have sweet dreams tonight, thank you:) I still love you guys! You are doing an awesome job! Go Yankees! |
| laddymischief chapter 9 . 10/25/2009 "i mentally high fived myself" not gunna lie. totally said this in my head with a james bond-esque accent. epic. ANYWAYS... love this story. Its so refresing and feel good. ALWAYS makes me smile :) and my hometown has an italian festivel too! Except in toronto its in the summer! best. meatballsub. ever. now im drooling. awsome. SO. moving on. you rock. by the way. amazing writers, but you both knew that;) ive said it before and ill say it again. thanks for sharing your talent guys..really. we all appreciate it more than you know. |
| monika116k chapter 9 . 10/25/2009 Ok first of I am so with you on the Yankees! I LOVE this story... I thought thr first date would be something classy. But, this was totally something memorable! Keep up the good writing! |
| mountainlion718 chapter 9 . 10/25/2009 great chapter, love the heavy lime, so hot...i like the festival part, they should do more of that kinda stuff...and i love the flowers he gave her and what they meant, so sweet. and YES!GO YANKEES! |
| shadowama chapter 9 . 10/25/2009 ha funny i was watching the game at a party today. ok first off i have to know...JUST HOW BIG IS EDWARD? if nine inches is an understatement than i know for sure that i'll be packing my bags for Seattle, screw florida, who needs all that sun? i mean seriously Seattle has HUGE well you know! *wags eyebrows* i really liked this chap. it was sweet, this is a real page-turner even though it's more of a scroll-downer! i was about to turn everything off when i saw that i had an email and i had to read it. ok so update soon, by the way, you guys are putting me to shame with your response time and update time. i mean DAMN, two writers and three betas all collaborating to get a chap out in that small amount of time. WoW! *kisses* |
| lovedforeternity chapter 9 . 10/25/2009 Wow, loved that little bit is citrus. I can't wait to hear the Tanya story, though I have a guess, I look forward to seeing if I am right or not. I love that he is opening up to the possibilities of being happy again. Great Chapter. Melissa |
| Charlees chapter 9 . 10/25/2009 I love it! I wish we can find out wat happens wit Tanya SOON! I'm busting with curiousity here! |
| vicki86 chapter 9 . 10/25/2009 Wow that really was an amazing first date! Can't get much better then that. Can't wait to see how the relationship progresses from here! |