| Reviews for Where There's Smoke |
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   gabs22 chapter 5 . 9/21/2009 Love the parallels between the two POV's - like they are mirrors of one another. Cannot wait to see all the awkwardness of their night out! Looking forward to more soon ;) |
| Spunkie09 chapter 5 . 9/21/2009 Like the story. Hate their meet and greet didn't go over well but it can't be all rainbows and sunshine huh? LOL Can't wait for more! |
| bitrsweet chapter 5 . 9/21/2009 Yes they are both indeed truly fucked. |
| FuzzyUnrulyJellyfish chapter 5 . 9/21/2009 I think I'd much rather run into Edward even if he is being dickward. Can't wait until Alice gets ahold of him. Great job ladies! |
| sncmom chapter 5 . 9/21/2009 Review vs. slam into Edward? Guess which I pick. I'm a bit sorry that Dickward had to show up. I hate it when that happens. Interested to see how he weasels out of that situation. |
| pac1025 chapter 5 . 9/21/2009 can't wait to see what happens when alice finds out. and also what happens on the outing |
| thinkb4uact chapter 5 . 9/21/2009 Wow Wonder what the rest of the gang will say when they realize Edward was an butt to Bella and the kids. Great stiry really enjoy reading the chapters. |
| weisyloveslemons chapter 5 . 9/20/2009 Damn he just had to be an assward around her. Too bad he couldn't just be nice and be her friend or at least teach the children since that is a part of every fireman's job to educate too. I hope he gets over himself at the bar. Of course we all know a pissed off Bella and a doucheward Edward make the best lemons. |
| TheMusicLover11 chapter 5 . 9/20/2009 he was dickward -.- o well :) UPDATE ASAP! lol |
| mommakal chapter 5 . 9/20/2009 Not quite the first meeting I was expecting...but very good, and very interested to see it play out. Love that they are in the same place with eachother and cant wait for Friday night! |
| vicki86 chapter 5 . 9/20/2009 I'm sure if it was possible to slam into Edward and feel him up that would so top a review. Love the meeting, so much better then the story tale perfect meeting! Can't wait to see how their friday night turns out! |
| BigBear64 chapter 5 . 9/20/2009 Just wanted you to know I like this story. It has great potential. |
| FuzzyUnrulyJellyfish chapter 4 . 9/19/2009 Floor it! Edward there's a beautiful life waiting for you! |
| FuzzyUnrulyJellyfish chapter 3 . 9/19/2009 I'm still lovin' it! |
| mytwilightaddiction chapter 4 . 9/18/2009 interesting story:D please update soon...can't wait to read more:D |