Reviews for Where There's Smoke
estarr96 chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
I have just found your site, and I think that the story is great. i really hope ypu go into more detail on how both Edward and Bella relationdhip where. I hope to here more on the Edwards parents, and of course I can't wait for them to meet. Something tell me they will have an instant connection, and I really cant wait for them to discover their love for one another. Plaese make sure that the 1st kiss to full of all the magic that the last story provided.
NJNYTwiGals chapter 4 . 9/16/2009
Hi everyone. We again want to thank everyone who has been reading and for all your wonderful comments. We know that a lot of you have questions about Tanya. The Tanya situation is a complicated one and to be honest we have a few different ideas as to what happened there. Stick with us and we promise all will be revealed in good time.

Pauline & Holly

xoxo
bitrsweet chapter 4 . 9/16/2009
I actually wouldn’t mind having a ‘beautiful’ life waiting for me in Seattle.

Excellent foreshadowing!
pattsylove chapter 4 . 9/16/2009
Great start...looking to see where it goes!
bitrsweet chapter 3 . 9/16/2009
You've got me curious as to what went down w/ Tanya. Was she a prick like Jake or something tragic happened? Got me wondering.
bitrsweet chapter 2 . 9/16/2009
Bring on Edward for some sexual healing!
bitrsweet chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Damn Bella is bitter. Jake must have done her over dirty. Can't wait to see the B&E meet up.
vicki86 chapter 4 . 9/15/2009
Waiting patiently for the moment Bella and Edward meet, and to hear the offical story of what happened to Tanya. Still thinking she died in a fire... but you never know. Update soon!
Sadie1787 chapter 4 . 9/15/2009
yay they're going to meet soon!
weisyloveslemons chapter 4 . 9/15/2009
Man he is killing me writing to her like that. It isn't healthy. I hope his beautiful life starts soon
allismiles chapter 4 . 9/15/2009
Yay! He's on his way to her. I can't wait until they finally meet!
mommakal chapter 4 . 9/15/2009
Another great intro chapter. I just love how it ended with Edward finding a 'beautiful' like in Seattle!
jshelly81 chapter 4 . 9/15/2009
What a good start! Can't wait to read more! Keep up the good writing!
Paperback.Pixie chapter 4 . 9/15/2009
Loving this story so much! I can't wait for Bella and Edward to finally meet-their dynamic should be really interesting to see, considering where they're both coming from. And Edward's letters to Tanya broke my heart. So sweet!

Great job! Looking forward to more!
gabs22 chapter 4 . 9/15/2009
Can't wait for Edward to get to Seattle already! Very curious to see how you both will write the group interactions and of course how Bella and Edward are with one another.

This is actually a pretty new Edward, well to me anyway. Most of the fics out there portray him as QUITE angsty - we have Darkward, Stripward, BB, etc but he seems almost like a regular Joe here, just very sad with the loss of Tanya.

Keep up the good work!
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