| Reviews for Where There's Smoke |
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   weisyloveslemons chapter 2 . 9/10/2009 So what I wonder what broke Edward and his girl up. Something tragic I guess. Will Edward be Emo? Will he be an assward? I look forward to reading his entrance into the story |
| Robicorn chapter 1 . 9/10/2009 YAY! Girls! Seems Bella has what I call Peyton syndrome! "People always leave" |
| vicki86 chapter 2 . 9/10/2009 I'm so excited I was number one, that is an impressive feat! Love this chapter, glad you didn't draw out what happened to Bella. Can't wait to see Edwards side in the next chapter! |
| ScrapNSign chapter 2 . 9/10/2009 Great writing! Can't wait to see Edward! Hope to see some firefighter action in the story too :) |
| JustEdward chapter 1 . 9/10/2009 Hey Loves! Great job! You are making me so proud:) Cannot wait to keep reading. xoxoxox ~Megan |
| NJNYTwiGals chapter 1 . 9/10/2009 Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to both Holly & I. Muah, Pauline |
| weisyloveslemons chapter 1 . 9/10/2009 well written so far. I like the "voice" of the characters. I'll stay around for the long haul. |
| sncmom chapter 1 . 9/10/2009 Ladies, you are off to a great start. Looking forward to more. |
| mommakal chapter 1 . 9/10/2009 Well done ladies! I look forward to reading more! Cant wait to hear what went down between Bella and Jacob, and really cant wait to be introduced to fire fighter Edward! HAWT! |
| Yara chapter 1 . 9/10/2009 So far so GOOD..I am interested! Keep it up Girls! |
| allismiles chapter 1 . 9/10/2009 Ohh, so Bella doesn't want to be helped but Edward is going to be a big strong fire man who is used to recusing people. I really like where this is going! Can't wait to meet him! |
| vicki86 chapter 1 . 9/9/2009 Love the first chapter. Can't wait till you introduce Edward to the story. Update soon! |