Reviews for Where There's Smoke |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Bella has a right to be bitter. But she's better off without the cheating dog. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella and Alice are both right. Alice needs to let Bella run her own life, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok a question , did Tanya die? or just move away? please reply thanks. Great story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why are we revisiting something that happened a month ago from EPOV? Last chapter ended with E/B going out to breakfast! I would rather have EPOV about breakfast rather than reliving Dickward’s behavior from 2 chapters ago. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Bella & Edward are Married & i am happy that Rose & Em are Married & i am happy that Ali & Jazz are Married & I am happy that Everyone has Beautiful Children's |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was nice. i had fun reading it. i do have to say, though, sometimes it felt a bit over the top. too much random drama just for the sake of it. and your characters seemed way too juvenile for their age. also, there were some themes - like depression etc - that felt like they were treated without "proper" knowledge. the way how you portray Bella felt after being dumped and how she overcame it, it just does not feel like it happened to the same person. i don't know if i'm being clear. and Edward was such a douche. i cannot believe she accepted going on a date with him when he first asked. what an asshole. he did get better in time. overall, i had a good time. i can only imagine how hard it is to create a story. never really had the imagination or the courage to try. so, yeah, thanks for sharing. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story the other day and I really like it. I have had a head injury. When I woke up from my injury I had forgotten me and this guy had broken up. That was 20 yrs ago. I'm married now but it really makes me sad no one knows what u go through when u been through that |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a douche. Those poor children so excited and they had to leave. I hope Emmett finds out what he did. Bella doesn’t want to live in Tanya shadow. I love Edward and Bella together but run the other way Bella. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m intrigued to know what happened to Tanya. I’m guessing she has died. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to like this story, but the dialogue is so, so bad. Also, Edward is a dick and Bella is weak AF. Plus her friends are super annoying acting like teenagers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhh, what an ending, love it all, even the angst you had me on the edge of my seat with! |