Reviews for Where There's Smoke |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know I was not handling the angst too well a few chapters ago, but you made Emmett and Roses wedding beautiful! Love the ending of this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving your story, but really how much shit are you going to put these two through! For heavens sake. If I was Bella I would be out, an ass of an ex leaving you nearly at the alter, all the shit Edward has put her through. Now the accident and he can’t remember her! And she sits there crying while he said oh wait... I can’t remember I need time but please don’t be near... but don’t be to far! Grrrrrrrr... NO! Enough with the angst shit! Enough! What next... you going to have one of them seem like someone is cracking on to someone else to be “not what it looks like”! There is no way two people can do this. All for angst, but they get good, you shit on them, it gets good, here chuck some more shit, see where it stick, ohh here let’s be awesome again... nope... more crap, shit and the kitchen sink! Enough! Enough! Enough! Just give these tow some friggin happiness. Their shit together and let’s she if they can even make it as a couple. They have been together a whole what 3/5 months! Too hard if this was a real relationship! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this! Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope it’s Edward! Or Emmett; he’s bigger. And I don’t want to hurt the pretty! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh, still no story about Tanya? I feel Bella’s pain ;) Pretty sure she will come back into the picture. (Maybe Jake, too) I bet she hates it when he stops emailing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooo, Edward. You’re still emailing her. I wonder what Tanya will do when they stop? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know Edward, if you going to be such an A-hole you probably should just kept the ring to yourself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Safe travel, and have fun at the meet up! I am not sure what Edward was expecting, but I am glad that Bella was able to get some of this off her chest! Looking forward to more :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh MY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I bet you girls were very young when you wrote this story! It’s sweet. I love it so thx for writing... you guys should write again, a lot of authors are writing again and it’s wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m still loving this! I’m so happy they are finally going to get together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I m sure you don’t look at these old Fics but I haven’t read this yet and I’m loving it! I wish you guys would write again. It’s never to late for Fanfiction. Some of the first fanfic writers are writing again! I’d love for you guys to write again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this Fic, so much! |
![]() ![]() one thing i hate about these kinds of stories is that theres too much sex. I mean they havent even been dating for 2 mos and theyre already having a physical relationship with one another. I wouldnt have that kind of relationship on the first date. Id rather wait till the sixth month or longer before i delved into any of that |
![]() ![]() ![]() I get it he's about to propose but still... Dont be such a dick about it |