Reviews for Where There's Smoke
Fanslashtic chapter 30 . 7/7/2018
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story! I loved every second of it!
EnglishBookLover chapter 30 . 5/17/2018
Love It!
debba8 chapter 30 . 9/18/2017
just found your stories! Loved, loved this one so much!
Rinoa17FFVIII chapter 20 . 8/10/2017
Whoever is leaving comments as a guest, please seek some help. you lonely old cow.
Guest chapter 20 . 7/4/2017
I really don't care if Edward has forgotten his memorys...if hes confused...whatever, this whole story is a bella shit show...as in bella keeps getting shit on.
Guest chapter 19 . 7/4/2017
Bella should just leave Edward and move on to someone else. You are asking her to accept SOOOO much. Her first love cheated on her for a fucking year! He was gonna get married to another woman! Then her second love, has his own love...a ghost that she will never be able to get rid of...and now he doesn't remember her? You are seriously dragging bella through the mud. If I was bella I would just give up on Edward...like, I just cant allow you to hurt me anymore so I gotta let you go. Because LOVE should fucking HURT!
asdf chapter 15 . 7/4/2017
hes a guy and he likes sex...so I'm sure it was great with bella...but I bet it was better with tanwhore right? I'm waiting for him to start comparing them.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/4/2017
I'm impressed with women that could except this, I just couldn't. Knowing that a man is only with you because SHE isn't here...nope cant do it. I'm not benevolent like bella is. I feel like bella is really getting the short end of the stick here. And I cant tell you how much I hate that Edward is thinking about how much Tanya would have liked bella, and that it was actually Tanya that brought bella into his life...seriously?
I rather like the stories where "meant to be" or "soul mates" mean something.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/4/2017
How does it feel to be second best bella? he doesn't feel for you anything that he already has felt for another...im sorry but I just don't like this. It makes it less special. And when Edward dies ...will he search out Tanya to stay with her for eternity and ditch bella. He did love Tanya first...and it seems he will always love her...so now bella will have NO ONE for eternity...that's great!
Guest chapter 12 . 7/4/2017
This would have been way better if the whore wasn't dead...it she had just cheated on him and left him...I really hate the way bella is second best and Edward will always have this perfect love for some bitch we all learned to hate in twilight! I know shes not a whore in your story but to me Tanya denali will always be a nasty fucking whore...sorry...nothing against the writer...I may not like a lot of your choices but...whatever you cant please everybody.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/4/2017
The letter that Edward wrote to tanwhore in chapter 7...why do people always say shit like that? like, I know you would want me to move on...blah blah...I REALLY doubt that tanwhore wants to hear about the new girl you are attracted to! Edward said...oh I think you would really like her...why? because tanwhores dead? if she was alive and you brought home a girl that you wanted to fuck do you think that Tanya would LIKE her? ya I don't fucking think so...so why pretend just because tanwhore is dead?

this Edward has WAY too much baggage...im just not into it.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/4/2017
Edward says "that smile has caused more panties to drop then he can count"

So hes a whore? hes been with SO MANY WOMEN that he CANT COUNT THEM? ANNNND hes in love with tanwhore denali?

and you thought THIS was the guy for Bella?
I fucking think not.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/4/2017
It seems to me that Tanya fucking died or something...This is really hard for me to read. I mean Edward said TANYA was his DREAM GIRL...that he will love her FOREVER...etc..etc... So this is a story where bella falls in love only to be cheated on by jake...then she falls in love with Edward only to find out that he has a ghost that she will never measure up to and that she is always gonna be second best in his life?...poor Bella
Kksmum chapter 30 . 5/3/2017
Great story. Loved it. Thank you.
twiclare chapter 30 . 4/21/2017
Loved that they finally have such a happy,my fulfilled life together!
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