Reviews for Where There's Smoke
twiclare chapter 26 . 4/21/2017
I have a feeling he's working so much to save up for an engagement ring, but I'm not sure it's worth it as they are in danger of growing apart. Bella is justifiably angry! I'm hoping it will be Edward to the rescue!
twiclare chapter 23 . 4/20/2017
I'm glad they're making new memories to cherish.
twiclare chapter 18 . 4/20/2017
Oh dear!
twiclare chapter 17 . 4/20/2017
It was all going too well!
twiclare chapter 12 . 4/20/2017
I'd wondered if that was what had happened with Tanya, poor Bella, I understand why she ran after reading that email!
sue1zide chapter 8 . 4/20/2017
Childish behavior. It's okay for him to suck face, he's a man, but not her?
sue1zide chapter 3 . 4/19/2017
I don't think that Tanya "left" him. Did she die?
sue1zide chapter 1 . 4/19/2017
I sure hope Bella has an attitude adjustment because I don't like her much right now.
twiclare chapter 10 . 4/19/2017
Oh dear, poor Jacob!
twiclare chapter 5 . 4/19/2017
Not a great first impression from Edward!
twiclare chapter 1 . 4/19/2017
This was re'd on Facebook so I thought I'd give it a try. Sounds like poor Bella has been hurt badly!
Guest chapter 14 . 9/19/2016
Wow. Let me spend this whole chapter telling you how amazing Tanya was. And how wonderful our life was and how much I love her... But hey be my girlfriend! But let's be honest, Bella will always be second best for Edward. The consolation prize. Wow
ninny 1 chapter 30 . 1/26/2016
I loved every chapter of this wonderful tale thank you
GorGirl chapter 4 . 1/22/2016
Saw this on TLS. I bet that Tanya died.
betty.p.dixon.3 chapter 30 . 10/4/2015
I read Beautiful Stranget first and love every word; this story, however, made me cry. I seriously tested up and had them fall along my cheeks when Bella overheard the conversation brethren Edward and Alice about the Christmas gift. Absolutely awesome story.
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