Reviews for Where There's Smoke |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad she has a good group of friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad life for Bella. |
![]() ![]() I am always searching for great stories to read. I don't know how I missed this one. I am going to read all your recommendations as well. Good writers and storytellers always give the best recommendations! Thanks again for sharing your talents with all of us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a fantastic story. I'm sad it's almost over! |
![]() ![]() Omg i want to slap the shit out of Bella as hard as i can , then slap Alice , jazz ,rose & Em for letting her leave fucktards |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a good story, but the I wished that when he wrote Tanya his first letter that he didn't call her love. That was Edward's pet name for Bella in the books. Also that he should have realized that Tanya wasn't his true love. There is only one true love if you are fortunate enough to find it. |
![]() ![]() Sorry but this story is rubbish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute, enjoyable story. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sequel please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I can't count how many times this story brought tears to my eyes. You so completely drew me into Edward's POV that one time, he made some comment that bugged me, and my first reaction was to write a comment to tell him off - then I had to stop myself and laugh because obviously it was the two of you PRETENDING to be Edward. Duh! Thanks for writing and sharing your story with all of us. |
![]() ![]() is tanya dead or are they broken up |
![]() ![]() so true depending on other people is only setting your self up for disappointment |
![]() ![]() Why? Why? Why? All these stories match. Same ol'...same ol'... Alice is all knowing... she will take over your personal life... blah blab blah... sheesh really?I always stop reading. Who in their own lives let's a small know-it-all take over their decisions? Sorry... cannot finish your story. To irritated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant story...the way you portrayed Edward and Bella was awesome...loved every single part of your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is funny and sad so good |