Reviews for Can Your Heart Really Lie?
doc boy chapter 8 . 12h ago
I do hope that there will be more bwen romance and that they will end up together in the end. Please update soon
doc boy chapter 6 . 4/16
I was trunning blue but I'm breathing again. Thanks a lot. I'm glad things have calmed down and that he found the real Gwen. I just hope he's right. But I have a feeling the other Gwen is gonna give a hard case as as well
doc boy chapter 5 . 4/16
You never cease to amaze me. I do hope that they find the real one though. I don't like the idea of two Gwens running around. It's kinda freaky and I want the real Gwen to be reuinted with the group the way she should be. Especally Ben. I'm starting to think that the hurt Gwen from chapter one was the fake one and the other is the real one. Or vice versa for that matter
doc boy chapter 4 . 4/16
Oh man I hate the clone stuff. I don't like where this is going
doc boy chapter 3 . 4/16
My heart is beating like a race horse. I hope they'll be alright. Also I keep asking myself weather or not Ben was dreaming or the DNAaliens are trying it again
doc boy chapter 2 . 4/16
The beginning was still kinda dirty but I'm glad that part's over. Looking foward to see the rest of the story. Keep up the good work
doc boy chapter 1 . 4/16
A little too dirty for my taste. Am I right to assume that Gwen got him into this situation and pushed his buttons on purpose and that you were looking for an excuse to make this happen? Either way it's pretty good for a first story. I just hope the rest of it is a little cleaner
Soul Reaper With a Core Drill chapter 8 . 4/6
this was actually not bad i just hope for an update soon
GentlestCobra2 chapter 8 . 4/1
Make more chapters it is getting great
Pluto's Son 22 chapter 4 . 3/30
Or "Gwen" and "No.2" it wouldn't have broken the flow if you used any of these. It would have made it seem like you knew what you are doing (I've seen many published books that have done this) and it would have made the story easier to understand. Right now im still not sure who the clone is. Sorry, but for now, 4/5.
Pluto's Son 22 chapter 6 . 3/30
Or you could have called the fake "Gwendolyn" and the real one just "Gwen"
Pluto's Son 22 chapter 5 . 3/29
This was extreemely confusing as you kept changing POVs and making each gwen call eachother a double or counterpart. You should have just made it Gwen1 and Gwen2
Ecomadness chapter 8 . 3/25
Loved this chap can't wait for more.
Danny vs A Month chapter 8 . 3/19
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Ecomadness chapter 7 . 3/17
Loved this chap I'm reall glad u updated and I can't wait for more.
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