|Reviews for Tales of Vesperia: Calamity Trigger|
| Kudo master chapter 41 . 6/17/2012
Seriously, come on dont stop. I am looking forward about Jin/Sodia romantic pairings. It didnt say 'complete'. I am so disappointed. You just stop at this chapter and ended up just give up. What a idiot. I am so love it to Jin/Sodia pairings and more update fast.
| Toast and Suicide chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
I am so late to this party. I know you wrote this about 2 years ago and such, but I dunno, maybe if you feel like revising/rewriting this sometime you'll take this into consideration?
Well, my first reaction upon reading this was, "Wow, that's a lot of ellipses." XD; I know you want to show pauses in speech, but the amount you use still seems to be excessive. The ones in the narration are pretty unnecessary (it's third person anyways) so you could remove those. You also seem to bounce between past and present tense a bit, so that should be edited out too.
I think your portrayal of Jin is spot on, so I don't have any complaints about that~ My main issue with this chapter is Estelle's characterization. I mean, I can't really see her hiding behind Jin because of a few bandits; considering how this is post-game it makes even less sense with all she's been through, you know? Same dealio with the comment on "what if the creepy people come back"; if anything, I can see Estelle trying to guard Jin because she knew he was injured. Estelle isn't anything close to a coward, especially when she feels the need to protect someone. It also seems like she is a bit too casual at times? I can't really see her calling a bunch of bandits "creepy people" since she already knows that... they're bandits.
(Also completely unrelated, but when you mentioned that the bandits had axes and Estelle had a sword, I thought of the weapons triangle. Derp.)
Well anyways, I'll be reading the rest of this! Hope this helped a bit~ :)
| Rage Nakasa chapter 41 . 3/28/2011
Damn I am loving your work already. I myself have been wondering a way to combine Blazblue with ToV. you have done a top notch job. I can't wait till your next chapter x3
I wonder how Tsubaki is going to take Jin's new girlfriend. Hehehe. keep up the good work!
*goes to read the one with Ragna in it*
| NeoCriMs0n chapter 41 . 1/24/2011
Took this long enough. But indeed, it's short. And Tsubaki and Makoto finally arrived, eh?
Update soon! _
| Gongondemon chapter 41 . 12/31/2010
You are driving me CRAZY with your updates! But I know there's a good reason, so I'll stop complaining.(grumble)
| WildfireDreams chapter 41 . 12/30/2010
| Sony Ninja chapter 41 . 12/30/2010
Tager Makoto and Tsubaki now that's some reinforcements, awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next one so till then see
| Windraider chapter 40 . 10/16/2010
Much as I really hate the Jin/Sodia pairing.
I have to admit that your story is pretty good.
I read all 40 chapters in 2 days time.
Anyway, I look forward to seeing more from you.
| NeoCriMs0n chapter 40 . 9/15/2010
Hey, hey! Sorry for the late review. But, here it goes.
I gotta say that this is indeed a short chapter. But, I understand. See, I'm a college student myself.
So, yeah. I'm gonna expect the next update then. And until then, good luck!
P.S.: I'm well on my way on doing your requested Fanart. I'm just waiting for my mother and younger sister to let me borrow the Laptop. Which will not be sooner. So, bear with me too! _
| Megaolix chapter 39 . 8/19/2010
Got to say, I was surprised by how interesting it was. I do wonder why it's not in the crossover section however...
So Tager and Tsubaki are set to arrive soon... I do wonder if Hazama himself will get some reinforcements however. I wouldn't be surprised if Relius or someone else took the time to find a way to maintain a link between the two worlds. There would go the inescapable death of Terumi.
Too bad for Ragna however... Unless you planned a surprise (and I do kind of hope for it... even if I know the chances are very low). And no Ragna means no Rachel either. How sad since I love both those characters. I'm annoyed by it a little since you still got Lambda here.
| NeoCriMs0n chapter 39 . 8/18/2010
Well, it's nice to finally have a chapter that is BlazBlue-centric.
Though, I kinda agree that Jin DID grew up and matured a little. And I would love to see how he turns up in the end.
| WildfireDreams chapter 39 . 8/18/2010
Interesting, still have no idea who all the blazblue people are though XD guess its what I get for reading a crossover I'm only familiar with one series in.
| Reiki Shutuagi chapter 39 . 8/18/2010
Just glad it's been updated! :) I was reading some old chapters and noticed it come up. Poor Noel~
| Leobracer Silvian chapter 16 . 8/17/2010
Indignation? Seriously? I keep hearing that over and over again, but I never see it. I'm one of the few unfortunate ones who never sees one of the most popular spells in the Tales Franchise.
| WildfireDreams chapter 38 . 7/20/2010
XD XD XD