|Reviews for Mistakes and Broken Hearts|
| Paperflowers101 chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Alright this can NOT be how it ends. You have to write more. Like where the hell does Eliot go? Does he go live with Hardison? Or Parker? How does the team work after this? Does Eliot ever tell Nate he's pregnant again and if he does how does Nate react?
I need to know! Now!
P.S. Is baby gonna be a boy or girl?
| sweettea6519 chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Nate should have thought about it before he slapped Eliot and punched him. Please update when you can.
| mikesh chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
should have continued and shown if he got help and ever found about the baby
| TheCritter91 chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
this is really good, full of angst! are you going to continue this? you should cuz this is good.
| Kaz-za-15 chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Awesome start. Please update.
| Gu4rd14n-Kn1ghts chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Hey, I don't usually review stories here on ff, but I just had to for this one. This is absolutely wonderful. I love the Nate/Eliot, and I love the emotions you showed.
I was wondering if you were ever going to continue this? Because I would love to read more.
| Account abandoned. abandoned chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
hm, seems interesting. Wouldn't mind seeing where this goes.
| expat19 chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
Is Eliot going to tell Nate about the baby? Please write more soon.
| Stompy Bigfoot chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
ooh...i like this...
| HellzCrusader chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
nice job. im looking forward to the next part.
| Gazerock4evr chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
I can't wait to see what happens next!
| Cally chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
WOW... that was wonderful and I hope that you will continue it
| Touch of the Wind chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Such a powerful and emotive start! I can't wait for more! Maybe you could explain about the Mpreg bit...is it normal in this universe or is it something special that is rare? Also when is this set?