|Reviews for The Newborn|
| Unknown chapter 22 . 5/7/2012
What is wrong with you! how could you do this! It should be illegal! i mean... this is like one of the best stories i have ever read on here and you just end it in a cliff hanger and LEAVE US HANGING? how dare you! This is like the best part and things are just getting good and you just quit. once again...how DARE you? Please, please, please start writing this again. I'm begging you.
We haven't even met Alice and Jasper yet! how could you quit writing when Alice isn't here? It's unbelievable! And the story was so good too! Please, please, please, pleaseeeeee start writng this again. PLEASE!
| Mrs. SRE Snape chapter 22 . 4/15/2012
well, i truly enjoyed reading this though since you haven't updated in over 2 years i doubt you will again some time soon. anyway thats for the good read
| ElaineUK chapter 22 . 4/9/2012
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Please finish it. I read it through in one sitting it was so good. I hadn't taken the time to notice that it was on hiatus, so it was an unpleasant shock when the story suddenly ended.
| Arianna-Janae chapter 22 . 3/13/2012
Like everyone else that's reviewed this story, I would love to see it continued. I have never before seen a more complete and detailed Twilight pre-quel and have thoroughly enjoyed the story. I personally love Tanya and often feel she's painted as the bad guy in so many stories.
Is there any chance you may re-visit this story in the future?
| EdwardsMate4ever chapter 22 . 2/20/2012
Even though I knew this story was on hiatus, I read it anyway almost straight through. I hope you will consider updating again and completing the story. It's a rare treat to see Tanya's POV, and it is quite insightful. I would love to see more!
| xiolajane chapter 9 . 2/18/2012
Your story so far is magnificent. "Edward stood on doorstep, his head down, with his hands in his tattered pockets."- Something about that sentence just tore at my heart. You have done such a wonderful job bringing Edward to life.
| EdwardsMate4ever chapter 4 . 2/15/2012
What a great, unique idea to write from Tanya's POV. I absolutely love the story, and I'll be sure to promote it.
| theorange3 chapter 22 . 2/2/2012
I thought the stoy was complete..oops. I love it so much so far, The insight to all the different characters is amazing.
Is the Rose and Emmett outtake posted anywhere?
| Saydonee chapter 22 . 12/9/2011
I really hope this fic hasn't been abandoned. I was reading over on twilighted and I would love to read the rest :)
| PammiG chapter 22 . 11/9/2011
I absolutely adored this and devoured it in one day! I was sobbing buckets when Edward came home to Carlise and Esme.
I am so sad it was not finished I would have loved to read the rest
| LauralHilll chapter 22 . 10/20/2011
What a place to stop! argh!
Loved the 30s Seattle, at any rate.
| LauralHilll chapter 14 . 10/19/2011
I have three brothers. This chapter totally reminded me of them. Heheh.
| LauralHilll chapter 13 . 10/19/2011
Oh Rose, you're so pretty.
| LauralHilll chapter 6 . 10/19/2011
I wasn't going to review till I finished, but I had to speak up for this chapter. I'm always happy to see vampires referred to as such. Well done!
| RhetoricallySpeaking chapter 22 . 10/1/2011
Please continue writing! This story has been great so far.