Reviews for The Sun Soul
Evelhundrege chapter 39 . 8h
God this was so good.
ReaperOfOaths chapter 38 . 9/3
damn it
ReaperOfOaths chapter 33 . 9/3
calling it now Giovanni-King Ash-ManRidingFire Dawn-WomanWhoWarns May-WomanFromEast
ReaperOfOaths chapter 31 . 9/3
roll credits
ReaperOfOaths chapter 31 . 9/3
why does ash hate team rocket in this at all I don't think they've done anything personally to him that hasn't been in retaliation for his choices
ReaperOfOaths chapter 27 . 9/2
that definitely didn't seem like something completely different at the start
ReaperOfOaths chapter 3 . 8/23
this seems like a universe where the pokemon are much more aggressive and I'm thinking arceus didn't lose to that king in the arceus movie and as a result all Pokemon are much more violent also because of this small towns aren't safe anymore creating a much harsher world or this takes place like 30 years earlier or something like that
3dumplings3 chapter 1 . 7/15
reading the first chapter. fits with the game world.l lik j so far
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Angel Fantasy chapter 8 . 7/14
I don't know why, but I have the feeling that out of Misty and Kasumi, it's the younger sister who's at fault here, and she conveniently twisted things around so the blame would fall on her innocent older sister. It would just fit things to have the only witness left to such a business be a wanted woman accused of criminal charges that she can't shake off herself due to the lack of a solid alibi (in this case, the only other witness that could have defended her being poor murdered Violet.) My biggest clue-in for that would be Kasumi's attempts to seduce Ash into staying permanently in Cerulean City rather than let him go as promised with his letter of recommendation against Team Rocket. Misty's so called affiliance to Team Rocket would have made her try to kill Ash at least a dozen times over since the start of their journeys, something she could easily have done if Kasumi's claims about her strength are true. But she didn't. Better yet, she saved his life three times over. And what does Kasumi do within hours of meeting Ash after hearing of Team Rocket? Flirt him up, and attempt to sway him to her side of things. Keep him in Cerulean City's Gym, right where she can have him within eyesight. Quite the suspicious stalling tactic, isn't it? Hmm... Hopefully things will get cleared up soon. And I cross my fingers for Ash not to fall into Kasumi's trap.
arsenicminds chapter 4 . 7/13
oh shit man, the way you just explained the gym badge system without actually mentioning it and the horror of team rocket is impressive
Im A Saggy tarius chapter 1 . 5/31
Very eloquent, you get a perfect score from me! Im looking forward to more of your works
lordonyx348 chapter 6 . 5/24
Onix not Onyx. Just letting you know
Guest chapter 38 . 5/16
Really awesome story, and a great spin on pokemon!
LincolnJohnson chapter 3 . 5/13
Nice turnout. Good to see fearow again.
LincolnJohnson chapter 2 . 5/12
Wow. A mission to save the world. Nice work on the chapter.
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