|Reviews for The Sun Soul|
| Firedon chapter 17 . 3/9
It seems really weird that Jesse is the one where Ash decides that killing bad guys is apparently not the right thing, even though he killed people for something as simple as kidnapping and Jesse tried to kill him several times. I won't even try to understand that.
| Jcraft chapter 38 . 3/1
You sure you don't write novel for a living? Cause what you wrote here is nothing short of awe inspiring! I just sat down for 7 hours and read the entire thing, and I really blown away how engrossed in it I was! All in all truly a great book!
| ShnuffleBuns123 chapter 23 . 2/26
Why did you kill Misty?!
| Magnive chapter 39 . 2/26
While there are a few things that I somewhat disliked (such as Ash moving on rather quickly from the various deaths), I loved this story. Realistic would probably be the wrong word to use, but when Misty (And Pikachu! PIKACHU!) dies, it really hit home that nobody (except perhaps for Ash) will be given any free passes.
| Qwerty0tm chapter 39 . 2/16
I loved what you did with 'The Sun Soul' though i was dissapointed when it ended. You really need to continue the May story line!
| BloodyHonedge chapter 22 . 2/3
| pikagurl23 chapter 11 . 1/25
I had stopped reading this story a while ago due to completely falling out of the whole pokemon in fanfiction phase, but have recently returned and wanted to tackle this story again because I remember how much I loved it when you started it. I think one of the best things about this story is character evolution and development and how you so masterfully describe the character's feelings and their conflicts. I enjoy a good mature fic that shows the more violent side of pokemon and throwing in some bits of AAML without it seeming too overbearing and in your face is great too. Your descriptions of the scenes are extremely elaborate and I can picture every event happening in my mind, as if I had seen it in the anime.
So well done on this and I look forward to finishing this wonderful masterpiece.
| Storyteller chapter 32 . 1/23
how does Brock suddenly know that Team Rocket is "good"?
| LordTargaryen chapter 38 . 1/21
I look through this fandom, searching for a fanfic to rival this one. I can't. This story had me hooked from chapter one. Definitely GRRM reborn.
| voidblade6 chapter 33 . 1/17
and then the world asploded... I could honestly see you trolling us so hard..
| voidblade6 chapter 22 . 1/16
Are you sure your not George RR martin in disguise. Because he does shit like that you know. On a side note now you have me fully convinced main characters can die and that if you get bored you may just end the story by killing off ash and leaving him to die in a ditch.
| voidblade6 chapter 18 . 1/16
james is a cold badass.. Jesse is a hotheaded psycho... I wanted to say it before but how the hell do they even work together..
| Time Sea Sky Primordial chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
| Dator Mortis chapter 4 . 12/14/2013
Okay, I can't hold this in anymore. Im only four chapters in but i already know im going to love this story and it is going to be brilliant. I just cant put off saying that any longer! It's usually so hard to find a decent Pokemon story and yet here one is!
| AwesomelyEpical chapter 39 . 12/9/2013
Maaan, this story was epic! I even think some of my Pokemon-hating 'friends' would like it; and THAT'S saying something.