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| bbeccaz chapter 3 . 10/9/2011
So he doesn't like that they have money and took over a smaller business? Thinking that they are ruining it like most rich people come in and do.
| bbeccaz chapter 2 . 10/9/2011
Love Edwards nick names for rose jazz and em
| bbeccaz chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Uh oh, this should be interesting? But ur summary says they hate each other, that kids sucks
| DepressionMaker chapter 23 . 10/8/2011
omg i nearly died laughing
| BabyBear08 chapter 23 . 10/8/2011
Great outtake, I can only imagine the conversation between the parents!
| How.does.this.work chapter 23 . 10/8/2011
aww wow! bless Edward! it's so sweet to see Esme and Carlisle's realationship. :)
| Maxi Fallon chapter 23 . 10/8/2011
Lol! Funniest thing ever! Loved it! Poor Edward! Oh well Bella went through it so dies he!
| iluvtwilightmre chapter 22 . 10/1/2011
Beautiful, beautiful story- thank you for taking the time to write it :)
I too am sad, but I trust you as an author to know when the time to end, is well, at an end. I look forward to reading whatever you put forth!
| Maxi Fallon chapter 22 . 9/16/2011
Hi! I just finished reading this! I love it! It's amazing! You have real talent! There were some parts where I wished you went into more detail but overall I loved it! This is one of the sweetest stories I've come across! Tayna was a bitch! I like Jacobs part in all of this! Wow James is a real jerk! I feel so sorry for Victoria! I hope you do put up that outake! I'm sure it will be funny!
| youngandmature chapter 11 . 9/11/2011
How come B hadn't confided in E about her poems though? She seemed to know and like him just as much as EC?
Also, when B first finds out about E reading her journal and she's upset - after the anger - as she thought they were becoming more and now tha was all ruined; does it really have to be? Sure it was a crappy thing of E to do but it doesn't seem so drastic to end a friendship/relationship over.
(also, don't know if you remember me, but I've read this story before. Was thinking about it the other day and had the urge to re-read so here I am).
| shelllynn22 chapter 22 . 9/8/2011
AWESOME story.I love that there was no life or death drama, this is the first fanfic I have read that didn't have it and i have read 70 or great job.
| Tutor-girl-107 chapter 22 . 8/30/2011
The story in general was very good, I enjoyed it completely, but I'm just going to suggest that maybe you get a beta, to help you with the grammar side of things, you're a good creative mind, but some of your sentences are missing words and have the wrong meanings for some. And I'm not trying to be a bitch because this is really an amazing story, and I loved it, I actually read it all and I was hooked on it. If you are planning on writing anymore stories and you want a beta, I would gladly help :)
| Miss F Cullen chapter 22 . 8/27/2011
Beautiful... perfect... i loved the ending!
| aquamysticwriter chapter 22 . 8/26/2011
A truly beautiful story, it was very well paced and i loved how well you kept the characters true to who they were while adding your own personality to them as well.
| youngandmature chapter 9 . 8/25/2011
(re-reading this fab story)
Does B at all still feel jealous about EC and 'hershey'? Because even though she likes Edward, she still likes EC, right?
And did B ever date before Forks?
And is B really better at pool? Or was it because she distracted Edwardby flirting that she won?
I feel bad for E. He seems to lose all arguments, always be in the dog-house etc. B even seems superior as farasbeing better at stuff- business and pool. E only prospers in sport it seems.