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CinnamonKitty chapter 4 . 11/1/2009
Loved it, glad to have another the story build-up, too...will look forward to the next chapter! Thanks!
youngandmature chapter 3 . 11/1/2009
God. Intensely captivated by your writing and am dying to see more? Please :) Do you need a beta either?
EdwardneedIsaymore chapter 3 . 10/18/2009
Hey I'm back! I'm going to be reviewing every single on of your chapters...beware!

I have to say, Bella's reactions upon first seeing Forks were pretty much priceless. From the curious onlookers to the stuffed bear!

Then I pretty much clapped my hands together when I learned that the mover's name is Felix...of course... of course! Just couldn't help it eh? That was genius!

Overall, this chapter had me laughing like crazy- so much brilliant humour! From the jokes made by the muscled mover men, to the pastry and then Bella's attempt not to ogle Edward Continuously.

Just when I thought it couldn't get any better you wrote this:

"I looked in Edward’s direction and he gave me a cocky crooked smirk, making him look sinfully handsome, and I had a feeling he would be the opposite of helpful. Note to self, avoid Edward Cullen at all costs tomorrow." I can perfectly envision that almost evil smile on his face promising to lead her astray the next day. SO SO SO SO funny! Brought me to tears.

Now you have to promise me to update soon because I really really HAVE to know what is going to happen!
VeggieGirl15 chapter 3 . 10/16/2009
Good story so far, update soon please!
zakisha chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
i bet edward didnt like tht her parents bought newton's store maybe he was friends wit him or something

and wat u said about how every scary movie starts out tht was so true haha

anyway update soon plz
7183496801293gfvhvnir87546y28t chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
LUVED IT especially the shirtless Edward. U should do a Edward POV, just to get a little of what's going on in that gorgeous bronze head of his.

DaisyBell2 chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
ek! i love it! and who doesnt love a half naked edward?
XxXtwilighteramyXxX chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
great story im lovin it :P

plz plz plz plz update soon
gallifrey calls now chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
wow, i love it.
crazedgirlz chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
Come on! I was hoping that this chapter would have a little chat between ECmusic and Bclassics, those crack me up, they are hilarious! But I absolutely love your story and I hope you update again before I die of .
elisabeth2me chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
it's a great story, i love it.

Edward acts like quite an asshole towards them, although i do understand him.

I'm guessing he was checking to see if bella was online, wasn't he?

hope you'll update soon, i can't wait :p
CinnamonKitty chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
Great story!
Jess - Loves forever chapter 3 . 10/13/2009

Really really awesome fic. Loved the first 3 chapters. it was brilliant reading them.

Both Bella and Edward are looking through there windows at each other. AW. _

Cant wait for moree.

Update asap.

Love Jess


PS keep up the great work.
crazedgirlz chapter 2 . 10/11/2009
Loved it! Can't wait for an update! Honestly, I found this plot incredibly creative and I am currently beating myself over the fact that I didn't think of it first. lol! Can I ask you a question? (well I guess that itself was a question and it's kind of dumb since I am going to write the question anyway, not waiting for an )Did you come up with that poem in the first chapter or did you get it somewhere else? Anyway,gtg, can't wait for your next update!
EdwardneedIsaymore chapter 2 . 10/5/2009
OME PERFECTION! I don't know where to begin! I find that this story is really well thought out and great attention is paid to every detail. The character's lines, I have to say, are also pretty genius!

& the codenames had me laughing my head off :)

My uni buddy, you are amazing,

from the girl in your class who has a slightly unhealthy obsession on Edward,

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