|Reviews for The Origins of Johnathon Legacy|
| Wolfsalvo chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
you should progress this story, it looks like you have a good (if somewhat short) begginning
| The Reluctant Warrior chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Pretty good concept you have here. I will say one thing: Continue this story. The premise is interesting and it works.
| dm0513 chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Why is this under star fox/ bittersweet candy bowl fan fiction crossovers? I'm, sorry but that needs to be fixed
| YoungKidStories chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
I'm changing the story a bit for the better, I'll have chapter 1 up ASAP
From the bored kid who wants adventure.
| SpyketheWolf chapter 3 . 4/16/2010
Great story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next, keep it up!
| White Hunter chapter 3 . 10/10/2009
This looks like a good story so far, but could you make the chapters a little longer so that it can grab the veiwers attention even more. I'll be waiting for you're next chapter to come up.
White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!