|Reviews for Never Know|
| Misty Narumi chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
| I am Lu chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Wow, another MiJack shipper. This is a treat for me. )
I must applaud you for having such an excellent story too, especially for a new writer. I saw no grammar errors, spelling errors, the flow wasn't choppy, and the prose was nice.
But, Jack was slightly OOC, but I'll give you credit for having Mikage briefly mention it. Overall, the plot was excellent, but some of the little details I.e Mikage being picked on, who her first boyfriend was. . .it should be elaborated. The reader wants to know about these things, like why Mikage was picked on, and perhaps more about why she and her boyfriend broke up. And there are other questions that could be addressed, but those are the ones that stick out in my head.
Still, I very much enjoyed this and I hope to see more work from you.
| no longer writing fan fiction1 chapter 1 . 9/10/2009