|Reviews for Island Holiday from Hell|
| KimberlyAnnT chapter 22 . 12/2/2009
Edward is one fucked up guy in this story
| FaithReyes chapter 5 . 11/27/2009
I LOVE LC SHOTS! Yum Yummy, I say... have you ever tried it with cinnamon schnapps? i like your story so far...
| Vendell chapter 22 . 11/23/2009
That was one hell of a vivid dream that Bella had. I'm laughing at the hooker clothes that Alice sent Bella home in.
Jasper is so sweet and wonderful for taking care of Bella, he really loves her. I just hope that Bella doesn't do anything stupid like run off to confront Edward.
| TishPhoenix chapter 22 . 11/23/2009
Luv'n the chapter hun!
| amrgirl59 chapter 22 . 11/23/2009
Great story! Please add more soon!
| bamagal110 chapter 22 . 11/23/2009
good chapter I so hope Bella in her true fashion don't do anything stupid. I can't wait for more tho...
| orionfoo chapter 20 . 11/22/2009
i love it
| 1dreamkeeper chapter 22 . 11/22/2009
i love jazz. he is such a sweet heart. great story
| Tater-K chapter 22 . 11/22/2009
loved it! cant wait for more!
| crazy4jacksonrathbone chapter 22 . 11/22/2009
such a sweet chapter love the part about the doctor writing her note so she can kill edward, to funny can't wait for the next chapter please update soon
| A Chuisle A Chroi chapter 22 . 11/22/2009
I do believe I'm going to have crazy dreams about psycho Edward all night! I love your story, Jasper is ny far my favourite character in the whole universe of fiction. Also, I love your Victoria and Peter characters! And of course Emmett too. And Jake being the dog, well, I laughed out loud at that bit. My mum gave me the weirdest look ever.
Poor Bella, and what a bastard Edward is! I only hope they arrest him, because if he died, then he wouldn't have to live without 'owning' Bella. But if he was put into prison, he would rot, knowing she doesn't belong to him anymore. God, I'm cynical.
Also, a topic I wanted to bring up, BELLA AND JASPER HAVE NOT BEEN USING PROTECTION?
Does this mean the pitter patter of tiny footsteps, cause I'm really not that sure about my feelings on that, and Bella sure as hell isn't ready for that.
And for the love of God, please can Edward stop referring to Jasper as a blond beach boy, or whatever it is. It's thoroughly depressing me, as Jasper is most definately a cowboy in my book, and to think of him as a surfer is quite frankly, INSULTING.
AND I loved it when Victoria said Jasper is Bella's fiance, my heart did a little happy dance.
Also, I love your Kellan and Jackson characters. I want one of each. To cuddle when I'm cold. Which is now, so if you just wanna send Jasper, Jackson, Emmett, Kellan and Peter in the post, I'd be most grateful.
AND snaps for making me hate Edward, not many people can do that, but you sure did succeed! I like it when I hate Edward, it makes me laugh at myself. That sounds weird, but yeah. And I can't decide my feelings on Alice yet. Bit confused.
AND OMFG. I'm sorry. But the fact that Edward managed to get into the hospital and rape her, just seriously pissed me off. Bad times.
Anyway, lovely story, well. Not so much lovely as compelling, I don't think lovely is the right word. Anyway. I am loving the story so far, and can't wait to see where this intriguing plot is leading. Keep it up, and update soon!
| ttaylor.marie chapter 22 . 11/22/2009
I hope she's going to be okay.
Nice ending to the chapter, Jasper is amazing (:
I want one.
Thanks for updating.
| Talis13 chapter 22 . 11/22/2009
Wow what an amazing story so far! Love the drama and especially the wonderful romance- it's just a great story so far! And edwards just a dick flat out. :P can't wait to read the next part!
| TDTwifan chapter 22 . 11/22/2009
I hope she's not thinking of sacrificing herself to save her friends. That would be so stupid, but so Bella. I hope they capture Edward and let those girls torture him slowly. Good chapter.
| Twilight-ObsessedDiva chapter 22 . 11/22/2009
Good chapter i cant wait to see what happens next :)