|Reviews for Island Holiday from Hell|
| Mistress Vixen101 chapter 19 . 3/5/2011
| foxylady1on1 chapter 24 . 1/19/2011
wow love it x
| fanicki chapter 24 . 1/15/2011
please update soon...
want to see how you end it all.
| Zannna chapter 23 . 1/14/2011
I going to try to do this criticism 'constructively' but we'll see. I'm not trying to be mean, but here goes: I think you should either remove the rape in the hospital, and just have Edward try to kill her, or actually deal with it in the plot. You have her being raped, and then having vigorous sex within a week of each other. Not cool, not real, in fact I find it offensive. If you're going to put a rape into this story you need to deal with it. Rape isn't something you can just toss in, and forget about. Having her on top isn't anywhere near enough of a concession to her trauma. I think the story would be fine without the rape. In fact I really love this story, as a previous review will attest. If you're going to have a rape in the story you need to change the story to reflect her recovery. Leaving it like this trivializes rape, like it's something that happens, like a sprained wrist, that you can get over easily. Please consider my point of view when continuing this story. Best wishes.
| Zannna chapter 19 . 12/22/2010
"You are my wife!"
Holy Crow! I got chills when he said that! It was like 'that is my car' or 'that is my dog' like a wife is a possession. I never got that point so thoroughly as in this chapter. I have seen, heard, read about men treating their wives like an object, property, but here it just really hit home. He has no regard for her as anything other than his property. It's so cold. I'm a feminist so that just really knocked me in the kisser. If my dad had ever treated my mom like that, she would have castrated him! Well if there was anything left of him after his children were done with him... I have to get back to the rest of the chapter now. I stopped here to review cause it effected me so greatly. Amazing work!
| dvlangl9299 chapter 24 . 11/17/2010
Just finished reading what you have here so far. LOVE this story.. Hope you update it soon!
| wholockian-obsessor chapter 24 . 11/10/2010
One hell of a story. But you need to update missy! I love all that you have done with the plot, so keep it up!
| WorshipTheLight LiveForTheTwi chapter 24 . 10/23/2010
YOU HAVE GOT TO FINISH THIS STORY!
This is great my favorite chap is when Bella was running around the damn house. My favorite line, 'who the fuck gave her crack'. Seriously that was hilarious.
Please finish this.
| Cullen Cousin chapter 24 . 10/9/2010
Loved the story and I hope that someday you will get back on and update the story.
If the reviewer TWILIGHTQUEEN8585710 ever reads this...One, take a chill pill, it's just a story and it is why it is called "fiction", it's not real. I have read a lot of fan fiction and none of them are picture perfect. So give the writer a break.
And secondly, there is no need to write the whole review in caps, it's considered shouting and rude.
Now to get off my soapbox.
Ashleigh, I think you have done a great job with the story. You have to ingnore the narrow minded reviews and don't let them bother you!
| TWILIGHTQUEEN858710 chapter 23 . 10/6/2010
UUUMMM..OK...DID EVERYONE JUST FORGET THAT BELLA WAS JUST RAPED AND SHE HAD ALL THESE INJURIES? IMHO I FELT THIS CHAPTER WAS TOO PLAYFUL BECAUSE EVERYONE ACTED LIKE NOTHING HAPPENED. RAPE VICTIMS AREN'T THAT IN A RUSH TO JUST HOP RIGHT BACK IN THE SACK WITHIN OF FEW DAYS OF BEING RAPED. I'M NOT SAYING I LOVE ALL THE ANGST BUT YOU CAN'T HAVE A SEXUAL ASSAULT WITHOUT IT.
| MichelleRae chapter 24 . 9/17/2010
Love it! Hope you update soon!
| lovedavidbeckham chapter 24 . 9/13/2010
loving it. Please update soon. It cant end there
| Ms. Kaylea chapter 24 . 9/9/2010
Great book! Please update soon!
| Deborah Stone- KarmabalanceDeb chapter 9 . 8/9/2010
| Autumn DeMayne chapter 24 . 8/7/2010
Hey so I read all the stories you have written and I really like all of them. But this one is really good and have gotten into it. So it would be awesome if you posted another chapter soon. :)