|Reviews for The Last Few Days|
| ZoroAbarai chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
This was so beautiful! One of the only fanfictions to actually make me cry! You are an amazing person, thank you so much for writing this! I'm definitely going to read your other stuff now! Everything was just so perfect!
| fma.lady.friend chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
Is it sad that I was listening to Christina Perry's Human while reading the last bit? I cried so much as I read lavi getting weaker, he is my favorite character and I so wish he didn't die. Rip Junior, goodnight sweet prince
| Luna Aiello chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
omg I just bawled my eyes out like a baby, this is so sad yet I love it :D
| BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
What a beatiful and sad story!
I loved every bit of it :)) You are really talented so don't be sorry. On the contrary, I wanted it to be even longer. I just didn't want it to end.
Please write more LaviLena,
| Isabelle chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
OMGSHH I loved it, it was so good and sad too but really good. All I can say really but o did love it.
| Kia Zaoldyeck chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
i am not cry...
i am not cry...
is so beautiful
i love it!
| mecheto99 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
i love this story, sad but i still love it And the good stories are usually long so do not worry the length was perfect
| Oro chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
I simply don't understand how a masterpeice like this, only have 32 reviews.
How can people, not see this beauty?
| danaratoshielover chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
My baby Lavi!
Why are you so nice and considerate and amazing and sweet? I don't deserve you!
*SOB* *Clutches chest in agony*
My god, it's so sad!
You need the perfect woman, but I don't think it's Lenalee you want! Lenalee's too damn soft! Too innocent!
DAMN IT, no one deserves you! You're too amazing for anyone!
*SOB* *Falls to floor*
I'm so sorry Lavi! You shouldn't have died like this! It's all stupid Lenalee's fault for being too slow!
I know you're not actually dead but... waaa! I can't stand it!
My baby Lavi!
This story was amazing, yet so damn sad! Why'd you make it so sad? I can't stand it! It's a real good story, and you made Lavi all heroic and compassionate, which he is. But I'm still trying to get over the fact that he's dead and that he was so nice to Lenalee! I don't think she deserved him, but I think I already established that.
tdlr; Amazing story, Lenalee doesn't deserve Lavi, Lavi is fucking amazing, no one deserves Lavi, & I can't get over the fact that he's DEAD! D:
| Starlit.Amulet chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
I'm crying...I'm crying...
This is amazing..but it killed me...oh god...
off to read your other ones now!
| Shiazen chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
Cool! I always love seeing lavi become such weak person. Please make something like this again!
| UndeadScribe chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
This did NOT suck. In fact, I almost had to stop halfway through it was depressing me so much. I knew it was a tragedy when I started reading... but, man... It was hard to finish. It was, without doubt, one of the best written tragedies I've ever read, and I read a lot. I cried. I love Lavi, and him dying...
I think I'm gonna reread Odds and Ends so I'll have somethin' fluffy after all that angst.
| EaglefootMoonflightVipertail chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
That was the most tragic and heartbreaking lavi/lenalee story I have ever read. I don't mind the length of the story reading it was worth it. I was about to break down crying when I read about Kanda's, Allen's, and Lenalee's reactions. And at the end where Lenalee was watching the recording. I would cry probbaly for a long time after reading this if it wasn't for it being 10:00 am and everyone is asleep in the house and I don't want them waking up cause that would ruin my day. And after reading this sad story I need to read something to cheer me up. Now I'm off to read some funny fanfics...If I can find some.
| TheRandomGirl chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
This was really really beautifully written and I'm sure I'll think of this fic again from time to time, because right now I can't get it off my mind. It's amazing how you string all the little bits and pieces together in the end in such a tragic yet sickly sweet and touching ending. All the bits of Lavi and Lenalee were great too. And though the ending saddened me greatly and I really was close to tears, it was really nicely written and the ending was perfect too. And with it written in Lenalee's point of view it was really heartbreaking to read the ending, as well as those parts when you talked about their promises to each other. I think you did a pretty good job, and thanks for writing this - it was one of the best one shots I've read.
| janrockiss chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
*Crying to myself now* T.T I am totally heartbroken now. Ahhh their love seemed so sweet. Whyyy Lavi, WHYYYYYYYYYY?