Reviews for Found
k chapter 57 . 9/4
I love it when next
CloakedDarkness chapter 1 . 9/3
hatguy chapter 57 . 11/7/2016
This story lacks a premise, and the first five or so chapters could be construed as one giant info dump. The character, Har, lacks internal conflict and it is thus more difficult for the reader to be drawn into the story, as well as the fact that it's hard to relate to a god. The character does not fit into any archetype. Of the thousands and thousands of stories I've read, I've commented on but a few. I comment here today because you show great skill for someone who speaks english as a second language. Your english is very good, and that is a credit to your country, the Philippines if I am not mistaken. But, you lack the fundamental knowledge of story creation. If you wish to improve as a writer, then you should study the three act structure as well as read "How to write a damn good novel" numbers one and two. As well as "Heroes and Heroines Sixteen Master Archetypes". If you do read those books, don't stop there though, and implement what you learn then you have the potential to be a best selling author. And I don't say that lightly. Your creativity is something to be admired.
Last few chapter 41 . 2/28/2016
Last few chapters felt like crap. You should have just skip the year entirely then go with this attempt at humor.
Guest chapter 12 . 2/28/2016
Had to post this but rome wasnt 2 centuries before Harrys time so he couldnt have taught remus and Romulus at the time. Maybe 3 thousand years to the creation of rome.
ollie.cooke.doa chapter 57 . 2/26/2016
No centaurs at all in the story?
Just chapter 2 . 12/19/2015
I imagined that it would be like the Greeks naming there God 'we have ZEUS POSIEDION HERA and Harry
Mari Wollsch chapter 57 . 10/18/2015
great, will you ever continua? xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
reinforced hell chapter 57 . 9/22/2015
Are you going to continue? Personally, I would love to see the continuation of this story.
Foreman88 chapter 27 . 9/15/2015
Ok, yeah. You need to work on your story a lot. My last comment was compounded in this chapter. Harry allows Lockehart to do these things...why? It makes less sense than thr sum total of the story.
Foreman88 chapter 25 . 9/15/2015
Ha. I don't mind crackfics, but Harry makes no sense. He takes Hermione's magic just for a verbal insult, but Lockehart tries to obliviate him and humiliate him and he does very little?
dloold87 chapter 57 . 7/27/2015
nooooooo, so much awesomeness unfinished. now I am sad and close to emo level cause this story is abandoned.
Guest chapter 57 . 5/18/2015
This story is perhaps the most engaging story I've ever read. Could I ask of you to perhaps continue writing this story?
Guest chapter 25 . 4/21/2015
Yes Anastasia!
opaque-fantasy chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
I absolutely love love LOVE this story. I think thus is the third time reading it... Actually I might have already left a review. Huh. Anyway, I'm slightly confused if lost and found is a different story altogether or if it's a continuation?
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