|Reviews for Hell's Lingering Kiss|
| FayeTheBitch chapter 11 . 8/24/2012
WHY U LAZY LITTLE! HAVE U EVER ACTUALY COMPLETED A MULTI-CHAPTER STORY?! CAUSE I'VE READ A FEW STORYS BY U SO FAR AND IM STARTING TO THINK THAT LAST CHAPTER APOLOGIES OF URS ARE A SAVED TEXT ON UR COMPUTER AT THIS POINT THAT U JUST EDIT UP A LITTLE EVERY TIME U USE IT! CANT U JUST COMPLETE SOME OF THESE INSTEAD OF STARTING ANOTHER STORY?! I MUST HAVE 12 IDEAS IN THE BACK OF THIS OLD NOTEBOOK I HAVE AND I CANT EVEN WRITE THEM RIGHT NOW CAUSE MY ACCOUNTS NOT FULLY HOOKED UP YET AND IM CLUELESS WITH COMPUTERS! IF U JUST CANT UPDATE DONT POST STUPID CRAP LIKE THAT AND JUST GIVE UP ON THE STORY AND LEAVE IT FOR SOMEONE ELSE TO HAVE TO DEAL WITH! UPDATE IT UR SELF AND FIND UR OWN DAMN INSPIRATION! DONT JUST GIVE THE HARD PART TO SOMEONE ELSE AND PRACTICALLY DISOWN THE STORY!
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2012
So this entire thing is a dream?
| Maddiepie12 chapter 11 . 6/28/2012
Noooooooooo:( I really love this story! I was really getting into it then I see this message.. -sniffle- WHHYYYY.! _ You are an amazing writer!:D the plot is REALLYGOOD, and the suspense is nutsxD lovelovelovelovelovelove it! The Amuto moments are the best x3 obviously my favorite parts.. eheh. Keep writing?3
| Spunky Kitten chapter 11 . 6/2/2012
Write a new chapter for this story. Add more Amuto in it though.
| Sailor Rayquaza chapter 10 . 4/11/2012
woah. this was rly amazing i hope you update soon even though it's kinda been a while.
| haileygrl chapter 10 . 6/26/2011
Update? Hats was a great chapter/story!
| Mi-chan42 chapter 10 . 4/26/2011
I can't believe you actually have a story that I haven't read.
I feel like such a bad stalker ;_;
I'm sorry, Shelly-sama. And I realize you haven't worked on this for almost 2 years...but...
W-would you...I mean...I know that it's out of line for me to ask. And selfish, as well.
But would you mind maybe...Finishing this story? And publishing it afterwards?
If not only for me, for all of your other stalkerish reviewers? C:
| sasorilover7 chapter 10 . 4/11/2011
this story is sooooo good! maybe you should publish it! and how is yaya connected in all this? you really make her seem like a regular person but right away i could tell that everybody else was connected. oh and it seems like ikuto is the only devil... the others all seem like angels... is that true?
| AnAverageLeo chapter 10 . 11/28/2010
*RAWR* NEXT CHAPTER
| AnAverageLeo chapter 7 . 11/23/2010
A bit of praise for you. HOW CAN YOU WRIGHT SO WELL? I've been reading this on and off for about... 6 or 7 hours. When Amu started feeling weak, I did. Seriously, when I got up to get a drink my knees almost gave out of me and I started feeling bad. No, I'm not sick and I don't have any health problems. I can just feel whats going on and it's so realistic that I can picture it, feel it, hell, I can smell it in some parts. I sometimes get lost for a minuet or two, but that's just me. I really appreciate your writing and you deserve a lot more reviews and respect. Not to sound stalkerish (is that even a word?), but I think I'm gonna have to track you down and get on my hands and knees to praise you. Yes, I love your stories THAT much. (Thank God for spell check, I can barely think clearly enough to tell what I'm writing.)
~Your #1 Fangirl
| TeamObsessedWithSupernatural chapter 10 . 6/30/2010
i beleive utau,kukai,yaya,rima,nagi,and tadsgay r on heaven's side and ikuto is on hell's side. also amu is like on some sort of balance on deciding on how win's this"game" and maybe amu is changing into something and utau,kukai,rima,yaya,nagi, and tadsgay r trieing 2 help her and proctect her but ikuto is trieing 2 get her 2 come 2 his side though i may b wrong but keep up the good work
| Ella Lola chapter 10 . 6/2/2010
i liked how amu summed up her recent experiences:
"Tadase had said he was an angel. Kukai mentioned a sort of project. Mashiro had pretty much clawed one of my high school enemies, and Ikuto had been close to raping me a few days ago"
i loved that. in all of its seriousness, it made me burst out laughing xD
i love your story. hmm what do i think is happening? well, its an amuto story...and its called hells lingering kiss, so im presuming that the hells lingering kiss is Ikutos, since amu hasnt been kissed by anyone else in it, and it always left marks. lol hells hickeys xD and that would be something for the reason why he suddenly wanted to rape her...?
it all has to do with Amu right? so i think that her boyfriend was murdered for a reason(or just killed out of the way so it could be an amuto fic. haha ;P), and that ikuto and rima are ...deamons? coz like ikutos all lusty and...well, a pervert, and rima practically deamon-bitch-slapped saayas face off...but she didnt deserve that. she deserved alot more, like she said. the whole deamon guess came from the fact that if there were angels, there would be their enemies too right, and im positive that angels mortal enemies are deamons. but i think that amu might be a half deamon half human...? and that she...is god? lol no,just no. that just wouldnt make sense.
look i just DONT KNOW. i really, really HOPE i got SOMETHING right, because i pondered on this all day at school. not that i had anything better to do, i mean where the hell am i gonna need to know what x stands for in reality! but i already know what it means, so i dont need to pay attention xD so im hoping something was right, and i hope you write again soon. its been, what 4 months, since your last update? please write more Q~Q ill give you cookies! ...i love cookies...
| Elya424 chapter 10 . 5/4/2010
Cool, write more!
| codebamboo chapter 10 . 4/18/2010
I'm slightly confused with this story, but that's mainly my fault, seeing that i have a habit of skipping important information xD Anyway, in my point of view, Tadase && Kukai && Utau are angels, and i presume that they were sent to Earth because of some mission or project that revolves around Amu. I suspect that Rima is grouped in the same party as Ikuto, the devils, because of the violence she created within the Saaya situation. I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter ! There's so many puzzles to be solved !
| xCenDRillonx chapter 10 . 4/3/2010
Heyy, seriously i was moved by what was put on your profile, BUT this story is very creative and quite good! please, give more credit to yourself, because this emocian you are able to build with your writing... its amazing... you are a VERY talented person, and also, it's brillent that you are spreading the message about not getting caught up in writing, and becoming a person no one wants to be seen as, then ending with nothing... THANK YOU!