Reviews for Shadows and Starlight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story great job |
![]() ![]() For Rosepaw of SkyClan it says she has an oink nose lol |
![]() ![]() Wait, so, if Bramblestar is a female, how can Brightcloud be expecting her kits? |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sniff* how sad but u made a great story Bane is such a *beep!*hole! Also can u make a sequel? please? |
![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() awesome OMS(oh my starclan that was amazing even though i only read the epilogue |
![]() ![]() Lol it was confusing; I was like; WHAT? SHES GIVING BIRTHABD SHE JUST BECAME A WARRIOR?!' WHY DIDNT SHE TELLUS SPOTTEDPAW WAS PREGNANT AS AN APPRENTICE? |
![]() ![]() Didn't Stormpaw have amber eyes? Like how you said Petal had the same amber eyes as Stormpaw... |
![]() ![]() ![]() One issue Featherkit is Spottedfur's kin, so she can't be mentored by her. |
![]() ![]() I don't want it to end but... BEST I still remember when spotted fur was a kit and she dreamed of being leader! |
![]() ![]() noooo I don't want it to end! |
![]() ![]() Ahhh the good old cliff... Good one. (Btw I am a pure thunder clan cat to the heart! |
![]() ![]() I LOVE your writing you have inspired me to actually make my own story! |
![]() ![]() Pretty good, although you should make it more obvious when you skip time. |