|Reviews for Saving Kale|
| MakeItHale chapter 1 . 2/22
Is it right to get the Harry Potter vibe from this story? because I'm totally feeling it lol good job :) other than a few minor editing problems and some rushed plot is say it's a really good story. You did my favorite series justice
| Annanarra chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
I very much enjoyed this! My only tip for you is; I think your epilogue should be a little more serious and meaningful. It was a little abrupt, and the only thing that is disappointing is a story with a fizzled out ending. So if I were you, I would actually leave out the epilogue. The ending was perfect before the epilogue. Other than that, I LOVED it! One thing that I think is a very important is portraying Bardon's character as the tough guy gone soft because of Kale like he was in the books. You nailed that one pretty well! :) Tough guy gone soft due to love is really fun to read about! :) It shows the character's true emotions.
I would love it if you wrote some more stories, especially some with multiple chapters! :)
More stories on The Dragon Keeper Chronicles would be AWESOME! :)
P.S. I hope you didn't mind my tips. If they offended you at all please forgive me. But I have been taking writing classes lately and they talked about how to make a great ending a lot recently, so I was kind of fixed on that. :)
| Senka92 chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Arthur is not kales dads name, it's kemry, you might want to reread the books.
| Don't Let the Magic Die chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
I LOVE it! Such a wonderful story and I greatly enjoyed it.
Kale/Bardon is a perfect pairing, too, so another pro to this.
Your writing is beautiful if I haven't said it before!
| Sarana Ishtar chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
A little rushed, but very nice!
| twilightobsessedforever chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Great Job. I think you portrayed all the characters the way they were in the book well, and the relationship with Bardon and Kale was very cute. I like this story a lot its very well written :) keep writing